Short Story: Whisper…

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Martin Thaggis


A remote installation on a far off Moon is visited by a survey team, but something is waiting...,


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The panel of the air lock slid across, and the blue light of its interior beckoned Sima to enter its curving form. The door panel rotated briskly behind him, and he set the laser rifle down at his feet as he entered. Blood continued to trickle along his arm, and on to the floor. He pressed the com-pack, and turned his head down to the mike that still clung to his torn vest.

"…Moments," he said softly, "there are only moments now, Jeri," and he pushed his weary body into the corner of the air lock, and slipped slowly to the floor.

" …I’ve tried everything, but nothing can stop it, it seems to have lost its mind, and there’s no reasoning or logic that will stop it – it means to kill us all…"

A mighty thud crashed onto the outside of the air lock, and then another.

"He’s on me already, Jeri! You have to get to the shuttle-bay! Go now, it’s…

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Martin Thaggis said "Thank you for your comments Melford, and I am pleased that you liked this Science Fiction story..""
2 years ago
Melford Maderazo Guest Editor said "I like your story. Thanks!"
2 years ago
Martin Thaggis said "Thanks for your comments Adam, and I am pleased that you liked this particular Sci Fi story.."
2 years ago
Adam West Guest Editor said "When I was just a lad I read Rocket to the Moon and have enjoyed SciFi ever since - thanks for this Martin - it put me in mind of the desolate terrain and situation of that story."
2 years ago
Martin Thaggis said "Thankyou for reading and commenting Jay. I am pleased that you enjoyed this SF story."
2 years ago
Jay Leffew said "I guess it learned the language of its closest companion? Good action here; I was screwing myself up with the tension you created. Great stuff; thanks."
2 years ago

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