Short Story: When Four Becomes One

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Justin Stuart


Four teenagers feel the effects of growing up.


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The fire crackled loudly in the warm night air. The summer breeze caused the light from the flames to dance across the surrounding trees. This was a typical summer weekend at Peaceful Moments campground for the four young teenagers, who sat around it at that very moment. They had been coming here for seven summers, starting back when they were all six or seven years old. To the far right sat Jimmy, he leaned back in his lawn chair, looking up at the sky. He was probably day dreaming or thinking about girls as he had found himself doing more and more of lately – but we'll save that for later. He was also the oldest, by a whole two weeks.

Next to Jimmy was Katie, a small dirty-blonde haired girl. She was cute and definitely the baby of the group – still afraid of the dark and spiders and basically anything that wasn’t pink or fluffy. This caused endless…

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Kate Smart said "good one - I loved your horror stories Justin and also liked this one a lot - the characters and dialogue are very appealing and I really liked the ending."
2 years ago

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