Short Story: Waking The Giant

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Steve Oliver


The long and heavy hand of the law is reaching out for a notorious hoodlum on the run. Does he have the nerve to pull off another daring robbery, or will he cut and run?


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Hudson Terraplane flicked the thin cotton curtain away from his face, and peered with snake eyes through the grubby glass of the window. The shuttered window looked out over the wide expanse of the schoolyard, and from here he guessed he would be able to easily check any movements, coming or going. The view afforded from the old empty schoolhouse was ideal, and designs began to crank over in his mind. Across the way, the street was clear and wide, as it swept into the town. The grey light was lifting in the new morning, and he could see clear across the street and into the Municipal City Bank opposite.

‘Babe’ was late, and Hudson grew impatient at the delay and lowered the heavy Tommy gun and rested it against the inner wall. He dropped the curtain back across his wide-jawed face, and pulled away from the window. He withdrew an expensive silver case from an inner pocket of his sharp…

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Steven Mace said "I like this, we're in Al Capone, Bonnie & Clyde, Miller's Crossing and Boardwalk Empire territory here, and I enjoyed it very much. I would like to see the expanded versions of your work, eventually."
3 weeks ago
Jay Leffew said "Very well written, but where the 'blood 'n' guts'? All talk, and I enjoyed the colourful uncovering of each individual's personality, but just as we were about to get some action...? I feel a little let down, Steve; is this going to be a serial?"
9 months ago
Steve Oliver replied saying "Hi Jay, Thanks for reading and commenting, and pleased that you enjoyed the story. Part Two is on the drawing board, with 'blood and guts', although with Part One, the threat of violence was always intended to be implied, so as to create an air of normality about their 'work', and therefore underline the sinister nature of the characters. Generally there were some adverse comments regarding serials being submitted on Shortbread, so have used the time available to embark upon a novel of historical fiction. Hope this answers your question."
9 months ago
James O'kane said ""Gritty stuff, and I love it ... keep 'em comin'.""
2 years ago
Steve Oliver replied saying "Thanks James, always had the intention for a sequel to this particular story -more blood and guts I'm afraid!"
1 year ago
Kate Smart said "Jimmy Cagney eat your heart out! very entertaining as ever Steve - thanks!"
2 years ago
Kate Smart replied saying "They're selling it cheap on DVD in tesco (and probably many other "retail outlets" as well of course!) just now. I love all the old Warner Bros. movies."
2 years ago
Steve Oliver replied saying "Hi Kate, viewing the film is definitely on my ‘to do’ list, but from the clips I’ve seen on ‘www.publicenemies.net’, it looks a very authentic ‘shootin’ an lootin’ yarn, and well worth seeing I think."
2 years ago
Kate Smart replied saying "I'm still on the microwave ones I'm afraid! 30 seconds and they're ready - can't beat that! Have you seen the Johnny Depp Dillinger movie - I haven't and was wondering if it's worth a look."
2 years ago
Steve Oliver replied saying "Thanks Kate ... You are close. This particular story is actually based upon the life of John Dillinger, and somehow I managed to avoid ‘…You dirty rat!’ - p.s. (How was the steamed pudding?)"
2 years ago

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