Short Story: Turkish Delight

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Wanda McGregor


Relationships are probably the most testing endeavours humans have to partake in. Melody and Ryan, two very different individuals find themselves in a futile situation that could have been avoided.


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‘Oh man I’m starving, can’t wait to eat this,’ Melody said trying not to salivate.

‘Well, it better be good, had to wait long enough,’ Ryan grumbled.

‘Stop moaning will you?’ Melody asked over the siren of a passing police car.

They dodged traffic back to the white Vivaro. He handed her the take-away as he pressed the unlock button on the van key. Nothing happened. She skipped round the front, pulled open the door, wobbled up onto the passenger seat and smirked ‘not like you to forget to lock it.’

Sneering Ryan said, ‘just wanted to be like you.’

‘Just wanted to be like you,’ said Melody mimicking him, child ego in control while her adult self fixed its dented armour. ‘Can’t even afford this,’ she said, her top lip curled in a snarl. She sat scowling out the window as he pulled away from the kerb.

‘Shut up,' Ryan muttered under his breath as they drove off up the street, out towards the dual…

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Diane Dickson Guest Editor said "Well my goodness this was amusing, gory, dark, scary, sad and a cautionery tale which is an awful lot to get into such a small number of words but you did it with aplomb. Well done I really enjoyed this. - Diane"
1 year ago
Wanda McGregor replied saying "Hi Diane, Thanks for your very positive comments they have really boosted my confidence, as have Marylou's. I entered this story into a competition and requested a critique. Although the critique offered some helpful feedback, I felt it tended to focus on the mistakes I had made and didn't highlight anything I might have made a good job of. Your comments reflect what I was trying to achieve with this story and I am very happy about that. May I ask you to comment on the structure of it as this is something I seem to struggle with, i.e. writing in 'snippets' rather than providing an beginning, middle and end. Many thanks, Wanda"
1 year ago
Marylou Anderson said "hi wanda. this had me giggling, i really enjoyed it. :)"
1 year ago
Wanda McGregor replied saying "Hi Marylou, great to hear from you. This was my competition entry I was talking about last week. Im glad you enjoyed it. :D I would really appreciate your thoughts on the structure, or lack of. Hows the writing going? :0)"
1 year ago
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Jay Leffew replied saying "Another way, if you'll pardon my interrupting, is to write down a list of fifty or so words randomly as they come into your mind, prepositions, adverbs, nouns, whatever, the more disconnected the better, then try and use them all in a story around one of them..........Diane reckons 'A. and the unicorn' has run its course, so I'm going to wrap it up as she suggested, but am I the only one interested in keeping this 'Thread' going? Does anyone else want to provide a story-line for the next one?"
1 year ago
Wanda McGregor replied saying "Thank you for your comments John I am very grateful. I have something cooking so to speak but im not sure where my pen is taking me. Sorry to hear you have scribblers block im not sure im qualified to give advice on how to overcome it! Perhaps writing a list about everything you hate about the block and everything you could possibly do to overcome it. I write lists a lot! I dont think a 'middle way' would be boring and it would be interesting to see what line your ink would take, if you will pardon the pun. Cornflakes was brilliant in my opinion. I always find it absolutely fascinating how many different meanings different people take from different stories. Keep the ink flowing - Best wishes, Wanda"
1 year ago
Jay Leffew said "Very 'to the point'. I often wonder if those freshly killed are too shocked to do anything about it there and then, or too inexperienced to exact revenge? I'd love to feel it was possible for them to create a way of wreaking retribution, but who knows when the two dead bodies will be discovered, and the perp. will be long gone of course; - if only they'd checked around for anything being stolen from the car... Good writing."
1 year ago
Wanda McGregor replied saying "Thank you for your comments Jay I had such fun writing this story, my husband now refuses to take his van if I ask him to collect a take-away! Who knows what the sudden but very subtle shifts are in the atmosphere that make us all think 'what was that?'......Best wishes, Wanda"
1 year ago

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