Short Story: The Wrong Directions

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Lise Juneman


Sometimes it just takes patience, and pleasant distractions, to outlast a stubborn woman.


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She spotted the sign:

Antibes 62 kilometers.

“Can’t we just call it a pax, love?”

It seemed ages since they had landed in Lyon and picked up the Mercedes this morning.

455 kilometers. Straight driving.

He’d wanted to drive. It was part of the holiday, borrowing the classic coupe from his Uncle, then heading to the coast.

At 59 kilometers he tried again.

“Love?”

He wouldn’t force it.

She knew that her stubbornness was irrational. But he wouldn’t listen to her.

She’d said, “It’s a left after the bridge.”

But, following his own sense of direction, he went straight. And, as it happened, he was right.

So, she opened the window and let the map fly out.

It landed on the lorry’s windscreen and the driver’s angry shouts were the first words of French they’d heard since starting out. Romantic.

He’d laughed. Hours ago.

She hadn’t said a word since.

She’d ventured a glance over. He looked so right driving this beautiful car, wearing the Black Watch jacket, her favorite.

How long could she keep it up?…

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Jay Leffew said "Contrary to the saying, I don't think arguments ever really 'clear the air' they 'air clarification' if you like, when you discover what each other really thinks, but always there is pride to contend with, and these days as many women as men have it. You caught this nicely, and I enjoyed the way you brought her round. Nice one, thanks."
6 months ago
Wanda McGregor said "Succinct and familiar to both sexes, brought a smile to my face as I instantly reminisced about similar situations - only there was no yacht, really enjoyed it, thanks and good luck, Wanda."
6 months ago
Adam West said "Chopped, pared and sliced very neatly - I have seen more meat on a butcher's apron - so sexy and sultry - just like the models! many thanks, Adam"
6 months ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor said "What a familiar and sad situation, how often is it that what should be joy turns to something else. Nicely written and I liked the ending.- Good luck - Diane"
6 months ago
Lise Juneman replied saying "...Too familiar, I'm afraid! Thanks for your comments, Diane. I always enjoy reading your stories. Good luck to you, as well."
6 months ago

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