Short Story: The Whisperer

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Written by
Fran Strahan


Something big is about to happen in the enchanting little village of Hadley Hill...


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Florence Pegler lives in the oldest cottage in Hadley Hill.

It is dated circa 16th century and she is the original occupant.

The cottage is near the crossroads in the village where in

years gone by the shops once stood. Up until its closure, and

as far back as anyone can remember, Florence ran the sweet

shop. It was a favourite haunt of the children and so up

until 10 years ago when changing times forced its closure,

she knew every child in the village from the cradle to the

grave. Florence loved and cared for children and took a great

interest in them and their activities, always encouraging

where she saw a talent, a gift, a natural ability. Especially

if that talent or ability was to do with animals. Since the

closure of her sweet shop it has been harder for her to keep

a watchful eye over the village occupants.

Next to Florences cottage and on grounds owned by her, stands

the Old Slaughter…

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Adam West Guest Editor said "Well written, especially with regard attention to detail both descriptive and character wise - fantasy is not really my cup of tea (His Dark Materials and the latter Potter novels aside) but I appreciate how much it is enjoyed by such a wide audience and hopefully you will get plenty of reads and comments on SB as a result - many thanks, Adam."
1 year ago
Fran Strahan replied saying "I like sci-fi but I'm more a watcher than a reader in that genre. Thank you for remembering The Cloud. Just a fluffy little thing :-) I was truly surprised that it did so well. Best Wishes."
1 year ago
Adam West Guest Editor replied saying "No Fran - it did not distract - as I said I'm not huge into fantasy but occasionally take a look in that direction - more of a sci-fi, dystopia and crime fan - however, I appreciate good writing in whatever genre and I look forward to more from you - I enjoyed your competition entry, Clouds I think it was ATB Adam"
1 year ago
Fran Strahan replied saying "Thank you Adam. I hope the formatting problem (which hopefully I have now sorted - too late for Whisperer) and the fact that I had to split it in half when it wasnt really designed for a 'commercial break' didn't distract too much. Best Wishes."
1 year ago
Andy Bottomley Guest Editor said "Way-Hay, I can see why you said it 'grew legs'! I should imagine that while you were writing this you had nothing else on your mind - and that you just became the narrator of the piece....which is how it should be. Good stuff.... On to part 2...... Andy"
1 year ago
Andy Bottomley Guest Editor replied saying "Ha-ah, so the storytelling bug bit.....excellent!"
1 year ago
Fran Strahan replied saying "Yes it kept me awake nights with its 'legs' and disrupted my days too! I had to keep stopping what I was doing or getting out of bed to write things down!"
1 year ago
Jay Leffew said "Disconcerting as it was to have the shortened lines spaced out over so many words, as you would with poetry, I managed to possess my soul in patience at the constant need to scroll the text, and found this very exciting. I'm looking forward to the next episode. . . . . Just one real niggle; - you don't (do not) seem to have much idea of why apostrophes exist. You had them where they weren't (were not) needed and not where they were needed. They are there to replace missing letters, and therefore should never be used for plurals."
1 year ago
Fran Strahan replied saying "I've replied at the end of part two, Jay. See you there!"
1 year ago

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