Short Story: The Unseen

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James O'kane


Bedridden, a patient writes a desperate letter to his sister about the new world that has been revealed to him.


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Dear Julia,

Please don’t destroy this letter!

I beg you!

Oh Julia … if only you knew how difficult it’s been for me to write this letter. How many painful days of misery I’ve spent hiding my medication – the drugs that make me an immobile, silent, mass of pain-free flesh – in the hope of becoming lucid enough to put pen to paper; you might suspend your disbelief, if only for the few minutes it will take you to read it.

My beloved sister… after the crash, while I lay in a coma, you sat at my bedside for weeks; always the quintessential older sister ... my doting sibling. You were still sitting there when I opened my eyes, so I owe you this explanation.

Have you ever wondered how close we are to other realms of reality? How thin is the veil that separates us from the others? Well ... it’s far thinner than you would expect.

As soon as I opened my eyes…

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Steven Mace said "This is a fantastic story, brilliantly written and incredibly sinister!"
3 weeks ago
James O'kane replied saying "Thanks for the kind coments, Steven; I hope you enjoy the rest of my work on here."
3 weeks ago
James O'kane said "This is a bit of a homage to Dennis Wheatley. I remember reading The Haunting of Toby Jug when I was in my early teens, and his voice seemed to whisper out of every page ... it's always stayed with me, and probably always will."
1 year ago
Jay Leffew said "There's an element of Thomas Disch in the ongoing inevitability of this horror, descending into hell. Very chilling."
1 year ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor said "Terrifying and wonderful."
1 year ago

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