Short Story: The Tower

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Linda Bond


Who is the beautiful girl in the tower? How and why does she mesmerise the local animal population at night?


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I settled myself down on the edge of the clearing in the woods just as the setting sun threw flames of thin cloud across the October sky. In the sinking light I could clearly see the silhouette of the tower, a needle of stone rising from the dusty forest floor with just one opening, a window. The window was shuttered tight with a heavy block of dark wood, more functional than decorative.

I had been sent here as part of my final training, to discover more about recent unusual events in the area and report back to the Aademy.

"Something's going on in the woods near the old stone tower," Chivers, my mentor had told me. "Local people have described strange sounds at night and the following day have found carcasses of dead animals strewn all over the forest. I'm sending Holden to take a closer look. You should go too, it would be good experience."

I felt a swell of pride at…

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Sandra Ireland Guest Editor said "I’m very partial to a bit of the supernatural and Linda’s story did not disappoint! Right from the start, I could not see where this was going, and that kind of unpredictability is priceless. The plot was fast-paced and the first-person viewpoint worked really well, a nice, snappy narrative. We learn what we need to know about Jack, but his back-story is kept brief and does not stall the pace. Linda preserves the air of mystery throughout- what is the Academy? There are plenty of hooks in this story to keep you reading, and if it was a chapter of a novel it would definitely be a page-turner!"
1 year ago

Christopher James Rushton said "not my usuall read but, once into this tale i was gripped just like the characters! thankyou, CJ."
2 months ago
Christopher James Rushton replied saying "i know that one, CJ."
2 months ago
Linda Bond replied saying "Thanks CU glad you enjoyed it. Was one of those stories that took on a life of it's own!"
2 months ago
Ahmed-hamid Woody Bagala-alina said "A captivating read indeed but I was kinda disappointed by the end...which makes it even a more compelling read! Bless!"
9 months ago
Ahmed-hamid Woody Bagala-alina replied saying "A follow up would be super I think...will be praying for ya. Bless!"
9 months ago
Linda Bond replied saying "Thankyou. To be honest, I left it open for a future story, maybe I'll get around to writing it sometime! Thanks for reading, and for tour comments."
9 months ago
Ahmed-hamid Woody Bagala-alina replied saying "Simply that one of the hunters would at some point in future also get to be hunted, so to speak. But its also that very fact that adds that bestseller twist to the story! Bless!"
9 months ago
Linda Bond replied saying "I Hope you enjoyed it. What was it about the end that disappointed? I'd be interested to know."
9 months ago
Steven Mace said "A great variation on the classic mythology idea of the Siren! Nicely written and could feel the suspense and tension."
1 year ago
Linda Bond replied saying "Thanks Steven, I'd not thought about it in those terms, an interesting notion. Glad you enjoyed it."
1 year ago
Fran Strahan said "Now that really did send shivers down my spine! A blood-chilling little thriller. You're very versatile. Thank you for a very creepy read before bedtime!"
1 year ago
Linda Bond replied saying "Glad you enjoyed it Fran!"
1 year ago
Linda Bond said "Ooh.....thanks Sandra, your review was unexpected in the nicest possible way!"
1 year ago
Adam West Guest Editor said "A rather sensual take on a well-known tale - I won't say to much about the plot and spoil this for others, but just comment that a frisson of excitement builds to a climactic finale - all done rather well, Linda - many thanks, Adam"
1 year ago
Linda Bond replied saying "Thanks Adam, it came to me as a kind of brothers Grimm meets Twilight, glad you enjoyed it."
1 year ago
Jay Leffew said "Thank goodness you don't write 'normal' stories so much; it's fascinating to read this sort of imagination. I always felt sorry for Rapunzel, and I still do in a way; whatever else she's still in prison... nice shudder, thanks."
1 year ago
Linda Bond replied saying "Thank you Jay, you are very kind. I'm glad you enjoyed this completely off the wall story!"
1 year ago
James Tate said "Yikes...I never saw Rapunzel like that. Scary and very well conceived. Excellent interpretation."
1 year ago
Linda Bond replied saying "Thanks James! For some fairy tale characters a tower just isn't enough to contain them!!"
1 year ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor said "a very evocative flight of fancy and a different slant to an old tale. Well done - Diane"
1 year ago
Linda Bond replied saying "Thanks for reading Diane. I sometimes wish I could write 'normal' stories...."
1 year ago

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