Short Story: The Sweetie
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"Riff raff riff."
The rustle of the wrapping resounds in the empty flat and echoes in my brain triggering a Pavlovian reaction.
I am salivating profusely when the wrapping finally opens and the sweet-sour smell of raspberry hits my nostrils.
"Mhmhh."
I anticipate the pleasure.
The sweetie looks very small, puny but very red and shiny like a tropical flower.
It feels sticky and rough in my fingers… very inviting.
I rush it to my mouth; the sweetness fills my tongue and the sourness tenses my tonsils.
It provokes in me a sudden wave of happiness and I start laughing, laughing in big bursts until my tummy aches.
Suddenly the damned thing, like an insect, crawls into my throat and slips deep down.
"Cough!"
I can't… bre-athe…
In panic, I realize I am alone in the flat…
I can't…
I am forced to silence, and start to loose consciousness…
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Short Story: The Sweetie
"Riff raff riff."
The rustle of the wrapping resounds in the empty flat and echoes in my brain triggering a Pavlovian reaction.
I am salivating profusely when the wrapping finally opens and the sweet-sour smell of raspberry hits my nostrils.
"Mhmhh."
I anticipate the pleasure.
The sweetie looks very small, puny but very red and shiny like a tropical flower.
It feels sticky and rough in my fingers… very inviting.
I rush it to my mouth; the sweetness fills my tongue and the sourness tenses my tonsils.
It provokes in me a sudden wave of happiness and I start laughing, laughing in big bursts until my tummy aches.
Suddenly the damned thing, like an insect, crawls into my throat and slips deep down.
"Cough!"
I can't… bre-athe…
In panic, I realize I am alone in the flat…
I can't…
I am forced to silence, and start to loose consciousness…
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