Short Story: The Storyteller's Tale

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Andy Bottomley


A story of a storyteller telling stories of stories untold......


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The room was small and filled with people. The storyteller, who had no other name, lowered himself onto the stool, a stool the height of a footstool. His greatcoat, ox-blood red in colour, crumpled around him on the floor creating contours and ravines of crushed velvet.

A log-fire spat from the grate filling the air with a resinous scent.

Those attending had gathered with singleness of purpose, to listen to the aged spinner of intricate tales weave his words into elaborate scenes, which captivated both young and old along the way.

He knew not where his tale would go for he was a listener as well as a teller. All he knew was that through intricacy of plot those who sat before him would hang upon his every word, then, unknowingly some would hold their breath or shed a tear as magic, love and terror flowed in equal measure.

The storyteller lifted his gaze and the conversation faded as his audience fell silent beneath…

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Fran Strahan said "I loved that. In my mind, it could have been longer. It was so atmospheric and gripping, really drew me in. Is 'he' a ghost? Just a few things seemed to point to it... Hard to pick a favourite among your tales. Currently now, its this one!"
2 weeks ago
Andy Bottomley Guest Editor replied saying "You could be right - it is certainly food for thought..."
2 weeks ago
Fran Strahan replied saying "Think he should make a second appearance. As I said he's very enigmatic, ghost or not. Theres something a bit supernatural about him. Definately could be fun!"
2 weeks ago
Andy Bottomley Guest Editor replied saying "That is a good assumption - I like your line of thinking. As for further stories of the storyteller you seem to be throwing me challenges left right and centre, and just at the moment I have a fairy in all sorts of trouble, once I've sorted her out I may well have a look at another Storyteller's tale. Could be fun....A"
2 weeks ago
Fran Strahan replied saying "As for 'him' being a ghost - without having the story in front of me i seem to remember him saying 'about them' "their story was never written down or spoken of". So I assumed he was a ghost from that. If I remember what I read correctly. Anyway, it'd be nice to see another story featuring him. He's very enigmatic."
2 weeks ago
Fran Strahan replied saying "Very interesting. Doubt that I will see The Dalesman or The Cumbria round here. I think its either The Countryman or Shooting Times that I use for the bottom of my cockatiels cage... (A client saves them for me for that purpose). This England I shall watch out for as you have a piece due to be published. Nice to know your articles are wildlife and countryside based, as I'm a big fan of both. 'Legion Of The Storm' is still on my 'to read' list. How do you self-publish on Kindle? Not that I'm ready for that yet. But it sounds cheaper then the other way of trying to get published. And you moorland conservation book. That sounds fascinating! Cant believe the rejection slips. Tried the Wildlife Trusts? Not that I know owt about."
2 weeks ago
Andy Bottomley Guest Editor replied saying "Am I published? Yes...ish I have had number of articles published in magazines such as The Dalesman and The Countryman. I've got one due to be published in This England although I wrote that one a couple of years ago and to be honest I've practically forgotten what i wrote about. DO NOT attempt to get anything published in either Evergreen or This England - it is a total waste of time as they promise you one thing and do another! I have also had articles published in the Shooting Times, which isn't bad seeing as I know diddly-squat about shooting and one published in The Cumbria magazine. All of these articles are based on either wildlife or the countryside on the basis that living where I do there ain't much else to write about!! On the shortstory front the 'Legion of the Storm' has ended up in an anthology - don't ask me how or why and I have also self-published a series of short stories on Kindle which is available as a download from Amazon. That is about it really, Oh, apart from a couple of reflective pieces that have appeared in REFORM magazine which is the national magazine of the United Reformed Church. I also have a yet to be published book gathering dust which is a 70,000 word piece that looks at moorland conservation through the eyes of someone who knows the square root of nothing about moorland conservation. This is piece that is currently generating a wad of rejection slips with which to paper the walls!! That is about it really, enough to keep me out of mischief, and not enough to live on!! As for whether 'he' was a ghost is very interesting - I'm not sure but thinking about it he could well have been and if he were then that could bring about a new series of stories where the ghost travels through time and the stories that he tells are not tales of fiction but of experience. Interesting....."
2 weeks ago
Fran Strahan replied saying "I'll add Legion Of The Storm to my 'must read' list. Intriguing title. So are you published in the 'real world' then. In print, in mags, possibly books? Oh and is 'he' a ghost? I will have another read and try to confirm. One way or another, all very intriguing!"
2 weeks ago
Andy Bottomley Guest Editor replied saying "Hi Fran, I agree, it could have been longer but on this ocassion there was a maximum word count that I had to stick to. I think like your 'Dog Laughed' story it grew legs and I did wonder whether or not to revisit it but other things came up and, well, you know how it is.... A little story attached to this story so to speak.... This was writen for a competition in Writing magazine. I submitted two, simply because I had two that were 'suitable'. I liked this one, the other one, Legion of the Storm, I wasn't that bothered about. Guess which one got short-listed?..... Legion...typical! Andy"
2 weeks ago
Charlena Miller said "The tension between the two novices and the way that it happened was really nice and the tone was perfect. I could feel the power and mystery of the storyteller. Really enjoyed this story!"
2 months ago
Charlena Miller replied saying "The title caught my eye. And the story was a delight. It was a pleasure to read."
2 months ago
Andy Bottomley Guest Editor replied saying "Hi Charlena, thanks for your comments, much appreciated. This particular story is I think one of my favorites but for some reason it hasn't really caught the eye of too many Shortbreaders and so for you to (a) find it and (b) read it and then comment is a great encouragement. So thanks for that and I am glad you enjoyed it. All the best....Andy"
2 months ago
Adam West said "I loved the dramatic tone of this - the language felt right for the nature of the story telling - nice story...many thanks Adam"
10 months ago
Andy Bottomley Guest Editor replied saying "Glad you liked it and thanks for commenting. Good to see the Adam West Radar is in full working order!! - Andy"
10 months ago
Jay Leffew said "There are too many 'but's in your penultimate paragraph, (the first would have been better as a 'yet') and you got a bit confused with your 'or's and 'nor's earlier on, but this was a deep and gripping tale of wronged souls, and I thoroughly enjoyed the ending; you have a great way with words, thanks."
10 months ago
Andy Bottomley Guest Editor replied saying "Hi Jay, I've been watching you creeping up the Reader Board and guessed my time was coming. Thanks for the constructive comments, which were as always much appreciated. As for the 'but's they were the ones that survived. I've got a drawer full of unused/edited out 'but's, together with a large pile of disgarded 'and's, 'therefore's and 'anyway's! I will however take on board what you've said and will see if Ii can hit a few more on the head in future. Nice to see you as Guest Editor....enjoy yourself.....Andy"
10 months ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor said "very powerful, lovely writing, poetic many times and gripping to the end. yup you did a good job - Thanks - Diane"
10 months ago
Andy Bottomley Guest Editor replied saying "Now I know I've started to arrive as a writer when (a) you read my work and (b) you appreciate what I have written. I have to say Diane I tend to read a lot of the comments you write in respect of other peoples work and all I can say is I have, and no doubt will, continue to learn volumes from comments that you submit. And so to recieve such glowing comments on this piece is a genuine encouragement - so thank you and I hope all is well with you....Andy"
10 months ago

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