Short Story: The Sighting

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Andy Bottomley


Outback America, a big cat and a gunsmith with a need for paying the rent come together in a flash.


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There had been talk, lots of it. The same conversation echoed through bars, shops and offices. News of the sighting travelled through the little town ofMiddlestoneand on to the surrounding cities. Reporters flocked to the town to interview the locals, and a stream of rubbernecking tourists flooded in to see if what they had heard was in fact true.

Middlestone was the local farming community; the place where those from the outlying farms came to out of necessity. If you weren’t in of need groceries or didn’t have sheep or cattle to trade, then Middlestone was a town you simply passed through on your way to somewhere else.

Since the sightings however, it had become a town of destination.

Middlestone’s two hotels had, for years, been making ends meet on the strength of increased trade on market days. But now they were experiencing market day levels of turn-over seven days a week, and would have welcomed having twice as many rooms at weekends.…

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Fran Strahan said "Hi Andy. I read this earlier - not long after finding Shortbread - and wasn't sure at the time whether it was 'The Beast or Al' . I've come to the conclusion now after reading several short stories by authors various, that thats what I'm SUPPOSE to be left thinking! There, I finally got it! (I hope...) Very sudden and 'impacting' conclusion. A very enjoyable tale, and you certainly travel well. India, US, fantasyland... brill!"
1 year ago
Andy Bottomley Guest Editor replied saying "Indeed you did get it! and if you ask me who I think it was, I don't know!! Thanks also for putting me on your 'bookshelf' not sure if I've ever been placed on one of those before, but I will try and behave and maybe one day I will become dog-eared and tatty through being a much read book. Hold on I just caught a look at myself in the early morning mirror and Oops I am dog-eared and tatty!!....Oh hum Now..... big question when will I and the rest of the Shortbread group get to read one of your stories? I for one am very much looking forward to being able to do just that.....Andy"
1 year ago
Jay Leffew said "Excellent atmosphere in this, 'though I'm puzzled that only one of them seems to fall at the end...? A couple of niggles I'm afraid:- '...fingers encircled a stone...' or '...fingers closed around a stone...' - and - '...as the beam travelled past...' or '...as the beam passed...'. . . . . Gratifying story; - I'm as incensed as Diane. Good on yer beast!"
2 years ago
Andy Bottomley Guest Editor replied saying "Ah, Yes, now this one, in my opinion, is not one of my best. Thanks for the encouraging comments however, and for your 'niggles'. I can see now that were I to have spent a bit more time crafting the story it may well have read better. I will bear what you have said in mind. Thanks Jay....Andy"
2 years ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor said "I cannot understand why anyone would want to go out and hunt this creature. I imagine it is based on the Beast of Bodmin and I want to shout leave it alone, it's magical and special and beautiful. of course I know it's not you Andy it's just that this has touched a nerve. Very well observed and of course expertly written but the story got my dander up somewhat. Think I'd better have drink - is it wine o clock yet - Thanks for the opportunity to rant he he he. Well done - Diane"
2 years ago
Andy Bottomley Guest Editor replied saying "Now this one I'm not so sure about myself.... I submitted it to the 'Shooting Gazette' which they liked but didn't publish because of the 'theme', which is fair enough. The problem I have with it is that I haven't clearly defined where this story takes place. In my mind it is based somewhere between the small market town of Leyburn in North Yorkshire and or a mid-west outback town in America! Personally I think the best bit is the ending, not because it does but because I don't know who or what got shot. I know the subject is emotive and so I was pleased to read that a) it touched a nerve and b) that it triggered a response even if that response was somewhere between giving the reader the opportunity to vent their spleen and driving 'em to drink!!....Andy"
2 years ago

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