Short Story: The 'Sensible Salamander'

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If, With myth and fable, And magic, I’m able, To sway a young reader to read, And teach a new word, With verse, they’ve not heard, Then, I think I’ve succeeded indeed!


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Far from the shore,

Lies a swamp, and what’s more,

The air is creepy and cold,

So, I gathered some logs,

From the trees of the bogs,

And,

An oak one hundred years old,

The leaves it had shed,

Were rusty and red,

And lay in great mounds at its roots,

I gathered each one,

And when that was done,

A handful of twigs and dry shoots,

Now, I know a trick,

You do with a stick,

So, I rubbed till my arms did tire,

Then one leaf became,

A little blue flame,

And,

The rest followed suit and caught fire!

The little flame grew,

And turned a nice blue,

That shone through the bogs creepy haze,

It flickered and shimmered,

And glittered and glimmered,

As it changed from a flame to a blaze,

But, a curious site,

I saw in the light,

A reptile, that glistens and glows?

For, out of the fire,

In the eerie ‘Quagmire’,

He crawled,…

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Diane Dickson Guest Editor said "thanks Jay for finding this it is quite simply adorable. Lizards of all types fascinate me and I swear they are magic. Really fun and lovely piece of work. Must read it to Ollie and Charlie - they love lizards nearly as much as I do."
9 months ago
Jay Leffew said "I wish I'd read this when I first joined 'Shortbread'; I wouldn't've been so nervous about putting my first poem on site. Whimsical indeed, and very readable, 'though the rhythm breaks down a couple of times, which doesn't really matter because the idea has carried you along so well. It's a delight, especially the rhyme between wattle and Axolotl."
9 months ago
Susan Donim said "Would benefit from Audio - I found this to be very sweet and cleverly written, a perfect tale for reading out loud to my nieces and nephews, or if Shortbread make this an audio- perfect to play as a bedtime story. A great read for younger children."
3 years ago

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