Short Story: The Scariest Place.....

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Andy Bottomley


A story that takes place in the scariest place in the Universe - a child's bedroom.


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The darkness, it clawed at Peter’s restless mind.

Images swirled around his head, while downstairs, the muffled sound of the television confirmed only that, after a day of play, he was now alone. He knew that beyond the door and on the other side of the wall was a world of light, and that on his side of the door, within the walls known as his bedroom, there was a quite different world. A world of dark, where monsters lived and drooled and where things, unexplained things, went bump in the night.

His six year old mind was very awake and was very frightened.

The warm cuddle that his mum had given him only minutes before was long forgotten, as were with the softly spoken words of the night-time mantra she recited as she turned out the light, prompting him to snuggle down beneath the duvet to sometimes sleep and sometimes not.

‘Night, night, sleep tight hope the bugs don’t bite. Love you,…

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Fran Strahan said "I felt myself reading faster and faster as Peter was being pulled down, down, down! Breathtaking, a great story."
1 month ago
Andy Bottomley Guest Editor replied saying "I'll bear that in mind! And if I have another one of those moments I'll let you know!....Andy"
1 month ago
Fran Strahan replied saying "Well, all I can say is dont be put off by the first time - and, yes do try again. (Any more, I'll get struck off!) Best Wishes :-)"
1 month ago
Andy Bottomley Guest Editor replied saying "I tried writing 'racy' once but got myself all hot and bothered. As my mind went one way, well a number of ways actually, my little digits pounded the keyboard but couldn't keep up! and then, then, well....nothing. The racy passage was over, the passion of the moment gone and what was I left with? Ascreen full of spelling mistake riden words and a memory of something that hadn't happened. I will maybe have to try it again sometime when I get my breath back!! Thanks for your comment and for getting back and I'm pleased to hear you're enjoying Shortbread.....All the best, Andy"
1 month ago
Fran Strahan replied saying "Thank You Andy, I'm so glad I stumbled on this short story website. There are so many great reads here. And I'm sure you are very 'racy' really!"
1 month ago
Andy Bottomley Guest Editor replied saying "Hi Fran, first of all welcome to Shortbread and I hope you find it both interesting and helpful. Thank you also for commenting, I'm pleased to hear that you enjoyed the story. I enjoyed writing it and am pleased that it has proved as popular as it has. i don't know where the pace came from because trust me I'm not that fast moving - I'm built more comfort than speed! Still, I'm glad you enjoyed it and to look forward to maybe seeing one of your stories pop-up in the not too distant future. All the best and thanks once again.....Andy"
1 month ago
James Tate said "Phew, that was a roller-coaster indeed. Very well conceived and delivered. I got caught up in the story right away - pretty much sums up what a good story is supposed to do. Thanks for the experience Andy."
2 months ago
Andy Bottomley Guest Editor replied saying "My Pleasure - but trust me I can also write some really howlers as well....and have done!!"
2 months ago
Adam West said "This felt like holding your breath under water scrabbling to get back to the surface desperate for air - would scare the living daylights out of a six year old, and they'd love it too, as I did - very atmospheric - you didn't miss a trick here, Andy - great story - many thanks, Adam"
4 months ago
Andy Bottomley Guest Editor replied saying "Hi Adam, thanks for being in touch. You got it one, it is childrens story with the sole aim of scaring the living daylights out 'em! I am involved locally in leading church services and am wondering whether or not to use it as part of the inevitable childrens address - but I'm not sure the adults will approve!!! Something in me says 'Yes, go for it'!! Hope all is well with you....Andy"
4 months ago
Jay Leffew said "Vivid, magical and overwhelming; - thank you for the relief if the ending, I feel very lucky I never had any such night-fears, my only remembered nightmares were when there were howling gales outside, and a sheet of metal clanged relentlessly, conjuring up swirling colours around a door-latch lifting and dropping menacingly. I never had concerns about shadows in my room, or things creeping up on me; was that because I was told 'Nighty, nighty, sleepy tighty, don't awake 'til morning lighty; angels guard you, they are mighty'?"
4 months ago
Andy Bottomley Guest Editor replied saying "Hi Jay, its been a while but finally I have put pen to paper and written something. Glad you liked it. I found your opening few words really encouraging - which just at the moment some of my writing is in need of-so thanks for that. I have a few ideas, but unlike you, my head is not always full of them. One or two now and then, then a sift, then start again, thats me! i have been doing a bit of songwriting and performing if that counts but have lost the upper reaches of my voice at the moment - so maybe thats a sign that I should concentrate again on the story stuff. I hope things are well with you and thanks for being in touch....Andy"
4 months ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor said "Wonderful writing - I was totally enthralled by this and loved every, scary, beautiful, haunting minute - well done - thanks - Diane"
4 months ago
Fiona Smith Editor replied saying "Sorry Andy! Not sure how the wrong version got published, should be the right one up now. Thankfully it hasn't spoiled Diane, or Jay's appreciation of the piece, which is certainly a testament to your writing!"
4 months ago
Andy Bottomley Guest Editor replied saying "Hi Diane, Good to hear from you, Happy New Year...if its not too late! Thanks for your comments, I really enjoyed writing this one but I am afraid the editorial gremlins stuck their oar in mid-way through as you may have noticed the main character's name changed before reverting back again! (Lesson to self to read, re-read and then re-read again before submitting!) Anyway, I hope things are well with you - i see you have been busy submitting while I on the other hand have been a tad lacking of late as I have been doing a bit of song writing and performing. Good fun but just as lacking lucratively as story writing!! ....Andy"
4 months ago

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