Short Story: The River

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Diane Dickson


Jed lives in a harsh world, writing takes him away but not everyone understands. 


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The clamour of the hand bell echoed through corridors and hallways, it was followed in an instant by the scrape and thud of thirty pairs of assorted boots and shoes on the bare floorboards of the classroom.

Miss Robinson stood from her chair and removed her specs. They fell to the end of their chain and swung gently over her ample bust.

“Thank you Class Four collect your things. For homework today I want you to write an essay.”

None of the children actually groaned but Jed noticed one or two pairs of eyes rolling heavenwards. For him there was a flutter of excitement deep in his stomach, he loved essays.

“Your work is to be entitled, 'The River' and is to be at least five hundred words. Hand it in tomorrow. Now bow your heads for the prayer.”

Thirty heads bowed in unison and the mutter of childish voices tried to find a way to whatever God looked down on this benighted part of…

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John Simmons said "There’s a pleasing inevitability about the story. We have an idea from the start how it will end but that adds to the tension. Diane controls that tension well."
2 years ago

Adam West said "A tad more brutal than Kes :) but in a similar vein - you forgot to include a whippet! I think we all cheer when the victim turns on his persecutor and you tapped into this mindest very well here. I particularly enjoyed the contrast between classroom scene and home and some lovely description, too...many thanks Adam"
1 year ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor replied saying "Ah yes, the whippet - I suspect it was up at the allotment :-) Thank you for your kind comment. - Diane"
1 year ago
Ailsa James said "Diane - An excellent story. The characters come alive just as they should when a story is as well written as this. You made it easy to begin to like Jed and to feel for him - so much so that if he hadn't lifted that poker I would have wielded it for him and given Barry his just desserts! - regards Ailsa."
2 years ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor replied saying "Thank you so much. Yes, poor Jed I felt for him I really did. However I don't want to incite violence so take a deep breath :-)) thanks again for reading and commenting."
2 years ago
James O'kane said ""Diane, I really enjoyed the tale. You write in a mesmerising style that enchants the reader line by line.""
2 years ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor replied saying "thank you so much for the kind comment"
2 years ago
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Diane Dickson Guest Editor replied saying "Thanks Jon - I have to admit that I did have a silly grin on my face for a lot of last evening, a tiny thing in the great play of things but then sometimes it's the little things that give life it's gloss isn't it?"
2 years ago
Susan Donim said "Hi Diane, I really enjoyed reading this- very chilling, perfect for a dark October night. I felt complete sympathy and empathy for the wee boy, and found the story to be so visual. All characters from the teacher, to "parent" to child were perfectly drawn. The story also seemed to echo the title, as it trickled it's way to the conclusion much like a river."
2 years ago
David Appleby Guest Editor said "Hi Diane...In the USA we actually have a talk show host who reads books...who is literate. This is rare. The host, Dick Cavett, once interviewed Tennessee Williams, one of our greatest playrights, but one whose writing--short stories as well as his world-famous plays--had elevated language to a poetry often unmatched by most, including many 'poets.' In what became a conversation, not an interview, Cavett said, "but we believe in forgiveness, don't we? Everything is forgiveable." Williams was silent for a moment...and then he looked up and met Cavett's eyes with his own sad eyes, eyes suddenly made moist by memory: "No," he said softly. "Not everthing is forgiveable. Cruelty is not forgiveable" I remembered this just now while reading your story, "The Teacher," and it, along with "Wedded Bliss," brought me back to the very moment when this gentle man spoke about cruelty. In both stories you seem to have read Tennessee Williams' eyes, and proved him wise: 'cruelty is not foregiveable.' Your writing is subtle and clean...and understated. Very impressive, Diane. David"
2 years ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor replied saying "Thank you so very much for that thoughtful comment. I do feel for the child in the story The River we must assume that his life is ruined. The wife in Wedded Bliss could I suppose be considered a little more fortunate as the times have moved on and mitigating circumstances would be taken into consideration. I find that cruelty in all its forms quite often moves me to tears and I think that at some time the band snaps and violence is met with violence. I seem to be writing quite dark stuff at the moment but if I don't do as the muse tells me I find I am deserted - do you have that? I have a couple of things waiting for the people here to look at but they are still a bit grim I'm afraid. Thank you again for reading my work and taking the time to comment. I must make a point to read some of the short stories of Tennessee Williams I have never done that."
2 years ago
Desmond Kelly said "Great. I could see it as it flowed. Reminiscent of Kes."
2 years ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor replied saying "thank you for reading my work. I am very flattered to be compared even in this small way with Kes. Cheers"
2 years ago
Richard Lambert said "Crickey. Do we have a new Catherine Cookson?, do hope so. More please Diane."
2 years ago

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