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Calder Burrows


An evening at home.


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“Your mum and I are sitting outside. We’ve lit the chiminea. Like to join us?”

“Okay Dad, in a bit.”

I slowly got up from the sofa to turn off the TV. With my finger over the power button I realised it was already off. The routine error brought a faint smile to my face. I passed through to the kitchen, looked to the window outside of which my parents are sitting, and I put the kettle on. My mum waved an action that requested my company. I mouthed, two minutes, and made the peace signal with my right hand. She turned back to my dad. They were having a serious conversation. I could tell. It had never occurred to me before how interesting a silent conversation can be. The kettle boiled so I took a cup, placed a teabag inside, and filled it three quarters full. My dad got up from the patio furniture to place more firewood into the…

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Calder Burrows said "I've only just noticed that someone actually edits and makes changes to our stories before they're published. I must say that intended the line to read "dad said" and not "dad exclaimed" after he said "Blasted things!". In a George Orwell essay he once said that writers should never used any other word that 'said' after using quotations. Hemingway echoed this sentiment once too. But it appears I have used 'exclaimed' in my story and it wasn't even me who wrote it. Hmm."
1 year ago
Calder Burrows said "Thank you, I have posted some more. I agree with with you say about writers expressing their feelings but I would say only after very good writing skills have been developed. Even on my course there are so many bad writers and if they'd just read the theoretical books they would improve instantly."
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