Short Story: The Last Laugh

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Linda Bond


A memorable honeymoon in Sweden is revisited.


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“Last one to the top of the hill buys the coffees!" Jemmy turned to me and smiled his toothy grin as he leapt on to the saddle of his bike, his legs beginning to pump furiously even before they reached the pedals.

"That's not fair!" I shouted after him, "I demand a recount!"

"A recount?" he stopped cycling and climbed off his bike, gasping for breath and bent over with laughter.

"Lizzie, trust you to make me laugh."

I stopped my bike beside his and he put his hand around my shoulder. In reply my arm reached across his broad back, firm from cycling three weeks on the trot in our honeymoon tour of Sweden.

At the brow of the hill we both took in a deep breath of wonder as our eyes travelled across the dark blue expanse of Lake Mälaren; white sandy shores hugged by tall pine, broken only by the intrusion of the stately castle of Skokloster, all turrets and cupolas, white…

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Fran Strahan said "Great stories, IMHO, are ones where you can 'see' the action and the characters as you are reading. Well, it WON ages before I left this message! Very great, very moving."
4 weeks ago
Fran Strahan replied saying "The Bears Have It for me! I read that, loved it, then looked up some of your others and stumbled on The Last Laugh. I can still see him clowning around on his bike 24hrs after reading, so you see what I mean! Great."
4 weeks ago
Linda Bond replied saying "Oops I meant the ramble is entered in the April showers comp!"
4 weeks ago
Linda Bond replied saying "Thankyou Fran. Your kind words have made my day! Please vote for it when voting opens in the April showers comp. X"
4 weeks ago
Liz Strachan said "A beautiful love story. So much was said in 500 words. A worthy winner. Liz Strachan"
3 months ago
Anne Green said "I really enjoyed this story, there was nothing superfluous in it. It was JUST RIGHT."
4 months ago
Christine Human said "timeless"
4 months ago
Robina Mccandlish said "very well written. A worthy wonner"
4 months ago
Patrick Dumas said "Enjoyed it!"
4 months ago
Sama Tabrizi said "thanks so much for your real and great short story.it shows the reality of life for all ages."
4 months ago
Valerie Ball said "This short but meaningful and very poignant story has an underlying but powerful message about the fragility of life. Jemmy and Lizzie's marriage ended prematurely with Jemmy's demise but I had the distinct impression that their ten years together was one long, happy honeymoon. Thanks, Linda; stirred the emotions x"
4 months ago
Barbara Timmons said "Delightful. Well deserved winner with this gem."
4 months ago
Dianne Ness said "The warmth and joy of love and august replaced by the coldness of grief in early spring.....lovely and sad...goosebumps and a lump in my throat!"
4 months ago
Peter Parkin said "Beautiful!"
4 months ago
Linda Bond replied saying "Thank you Peter."
4 months ago
James Tate said "Lovely happy/sad with the intervention of the gull rounding it off beautifully. Thanks for the experience."
4 months ago
Linda Bond replied saying "Thanks for your kind comment James. It's always good to know that your writing clearly communicates what you had intended."
4 months ago
Heidi-jo Swain said "This was wonderfully written Linda and incredibly poignant. Thank you."
4 months ago
Linda Bond replied saying "Thank you Heidi-Jo. I'm glad you enjoyed it."
4 months ago
Robin Pilcher Director said "A great example of how to write a poignant little story with an economy of words. Terrific."
4 months ago
Linda Bond replied saying "Thanks Robin."
4 months ago
Helen Somers said "High five Linda. Very well done. Helen x"
4 months ago
Linda Bond replied saying "Thanks Helen. X"
4 months ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor said "Many congratulations to a very worthy winner. A lovely story with great descriptive passages and a sad but beautiful ending. Diane"
4 months ago
Linda Bond replied saying "Thanks Diane."
4 months ago
Suzanne Mays said "I so hope the first part of this story is true. What a wonderful honeymoon. The ending was sad, but it was all in the journey. Good luck. Suzanne"
4 months ago
Adam West said "Poignant stuff - did not suspect where this would go - vividly described, thoughtfully written piece many thanks and good luck, Adam"
4 months ago
David Lake said "A story set in two parts with striking scenery. Sweet and bitter, it conveyed everything. Well done, Linda."
4 months ago
Bill Peters said "Sad and atmospheric story. Thanks, Bill"
4 months ago
Helen Somers said "What a lovely but sad story. Very moving. Thank you Linda x"
4 months ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor said "Lovely descriptive sections in this and a bittersweet ending - Thanks for this - Diane"
4 months ago
Katy Hulme said "A beautifully moving story, Linda. Thank you for sharing."
4 months ago
Maria Wilkins said "another enjoyable story linda,cheered me up xx"
4 months ago
Linda Bond replied saying "Thanks Maria. X"
4 months ago
Linda Bond said "Thankyou Meg, I have a lot of fond memories of that part of Sweden. I'm glad you enjoyed my story."
4 months ago
Meg Malpass said "A beautiful story. Such happiness and sadness without sentimentality. Your descriptions of Sweden make me want to visit. Thank you for sharing."
4 months ago

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