Short Story: The Laptop

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Patsy R Liles


A troubled teenage boy, unhappy with his name, is a loner. He visits the city dump where he finds a Laptop compuer and pays one dollar for it. It poses problems for him, but he makes an astonishing discovery when he opens it. Is it magic? Or what?


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The fifteen-year-old boy rode his bike with skill, down the street whilst avoiding cars, people and dogs. He obeyed the traffic lights, and ignored the greetings of people who knew him. He was angry. He had never been so angry. He just wanted to change his name. His mother was so unrelenting that he wanted to hit her. But God said to honor his parents, so —

"Your name is Oswald, and that is final. People just don’t appreciate good old names," he mimicked in a high voice as he followed a Greyhound bus for a couple of blocks. "If anyone ridicules you, tell them it means ‘divine power’ and they should respect what your family has named you."

The bus stopped, and so did Oswald. "Divine power," he snarled. "No way. Not me."

The bus started up. He followed behind for few more blocks then made a quick right turn down a short street, onto a dirt road that soon brought him…

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Adam West said "This is not unlike a PKD short or Roald Dhal- weird unexplained events unfolding. Fear and loathing and what if's in equal measure made this a wonderful read. I wanted more at the end and agree Patsy the 3500 word limit can be a problem (there have been a number of stories recently up nearly 4000 words - so there must be a little leeway there) - alternatively you could split a longer story into more than one part. Loved this strange little piece and quite a departure for you...many thanks, Adam"
8 months ago
Patsy R Liles replied saying "Adam, it was fun to write, sort of did itself, without much from me. I'm not into occult, so when I stumbled across the meaning of the word Oswald, it was written. I am toying with another, have to see if they have ever found any of these peple and if Oswald had anything to do with it....think I should do it? The power will possibly be something unexpected. Gosh I could get going on it right now. Glad you enjoyed it since I did too. And I must say your work is coming along well. See you, Patsy"
8 months ago
Jay Leffew said "Considering it had no 'dialogue' I found this very gripping, and just my scene. Thanks, and more please!"
8 months ago
Patsy R Liles replied saying "I am happy that this was pleasing to you. I have so much more of Oswald to write about, must sort it out. Later, perhaps. Patsy"
8 months ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor said "I thought this was well written and it had me hooked, I felt for the boy and the mystery was very well wrought, I have to say that I could have taken more of this story even though the ending was good. - Diane"
8 months ago
Patsy R Liles replied saying "Thanks Diane. Staying within 3,000 words leaves openings for more. Perhaps I shall go on with Oswald's story, have some ideas for that. This is not a genre that I usually read, so when my daughter called, squealing, you wrote this? I had to laugh. She loves it and wants me to go on with more....so have to see. Patsy"
8 months ago

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