Short Story: The Effects Of Love

Short Story: The Effects Of Love

You make me laugh and cry by turns; - I love you very much.

I care so deeply that it burns - a hole into my crutch...

(No, not crotch...)

Just like the sun, you shine so bright - in all my thoughts of you.

I feel your arms around me tight; - I think I've lost a shoe...

(It doesn't matter though...)

Forgive me, now I think of it - there's something else I've lost,

'Though I've forgotten, I admit, - just what it was; I'm crosst.

(Yes, but 'cross' didn't rhyme...)

You've sent my rhyming all to cock, - (not in the literal sense),

Your presence is there like a rock, - warmed by the sun's incandescence.

(No, it doesn't scan; it's all your fault!)

So now I s'pose you'll tell me off, - say I'm not really trying.

Oh, really? Is that so? (coff, coff), - Could be a time for frying.

(Well, there was crying or prying or drying or sighing, etc. take your pick...)

I've just recalled what I forgot, - the supports for the shelves.

I'll have a look soon, but I've got - to make love to you, - think erotic thoughts about you, - and dream of just being with you, - for ever and ever, - just ourselves...

(What d'you think?)