Short Story: The Cry Of The Owl

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Diane Dickson


The boy answers the call of the owl but where and to what does it lead.


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The sound of the owl woke him. It had often woken him, and as before, he lay for a long moment waiting. Yes, there it came again through the darkness. He had envisaged it, winding and twisting between the huge limbs of the old trees and then once it gained the open field rising, fleeting and speeding over the stubble towards his window.

His bare feet found the rough boards and bony toes carried him forward to the window, over the ledge and across the tiles of the lower roof. The old tree was as a staircase; so familiar were the branches and the notches on the bark. Soft earth kissed the skin on his soles as he landed gentle as a baby mouse between the twisted roots.

He didn’t wait and he didn’t need to look, the owl had called and the house would be sleeping. His sister curled under her coverlet a soft fist crushed against her face and her…

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Lynne O'sullivan said "Liked it very much. Very atmospheric yet contemporary with the vampirical slant!"
9 months ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor replied saying "Thank you so much, the sequel is with the editors at the moment - I hope you have a moment to read it always assuming it makes the grade. Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment - Diane"
9 months ago
Patsy R Liles said "I can only quote Desmond Kelly, here. It is a thriller, and I will look for the coming inspiration with this, Diane. Good job. Patsy Liles"
10 months ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor replied saying "thanks Patsy - the sequel is with the editors but I just hope it doesn't disappoint. - Cheers - Diane"
10 months ago
Desmond Kelly said "You write so well Diane. It's possible both to see, smell, taste and hear every single aspect of this story and as always a great story well told. You have certainly got your genre well pegged. Des"
10 months ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor replied saying "How very kind Desmond and from another prolific contributor. Thank you so much. - Diane"
10 months ago
Jay Leffew said "Can't really add much to the previous comments, except that this seems to be a very promising prequel? You need to have a look through Diane's stories, Richard, they're pretty subtle."
10 months ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor replied saying "Thank you Jay as always for reading and taking the time to comment. As I have said I am very drawn to this character and he did come between me and my sleep last night. I was up and down like a yo yo jotting in my notebook. I hope it goes somewhere. - Thanks again - Diane"
10 months ago
Adam West said "Diane is a past master at gore, but of course, as here, she has the good sense to be subtle about it - this had the dreamy effect of...err - a dream - won't give anymore away - nicely done...many thanks Adam"
10 months ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor replied saying "Sir you make me blush you are too kind. Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment so very generously. blood guts and gore what would my old granny think of me eh :-0"
10 months ago
Richard Ardus said "Diane, I didn't know you wrote horror! I enjoyed the images and atmosphere and the fact that an owl calls the boy out. I suppose you intend to leave us high and dry - will there be more?"
10 months ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor replied saying "sorry I answered your last comment on the way past my machine. I now have my glass of wine :-) I wrote the Cry of the Owl intending it be a stand alone piece but I have to say that I do feel rather drawn to the boy and wonder if I can take it further, as I say I am very tempted. thank you so very much for your interest and for taking the time to comment - Diane"
10 months ago
Richard Ardus replied saying "I have read Skype of course and I'll look at some of your others in this genre. I wanted to know if you intended to continue the Cry of the Owl. It certainly engendered a hunger/thirst in this reader!"
10 months ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor replied saying "Oh yes there are some pretty grim things in my list - as for whether there will be more - I must admit I am sorely tempted"
10 months ago

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