Short Story: The Cost Of Travel

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Diane Dickson


First published by Arrival Press in 1994 this piece acknowledges that everything experience has its price.


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The cost of travel.

It’s hard to put your finger on the feeling

to reason out that little empty space.

You always said you knew that you would travel

and your soul was drawn to more than just one place.

You’ve watched the sun go down on foreign landscapes

You’ve seen the desert glow on moonlit nights

You’ve walked in lands renowned in song and story

And your mind’s a treasure trove of wondrous sights.

The journeys that you took have made you wiser

you learnt so many lessons on the way.

The heat and dust, the strange beliefs, the wonders

But still there is no place that you would stay.

And now when you come back to where you started

Your children grown, your mother’s hair turned grey,

The circle that you left has closed behind you

your old friends now have nothing left to say.

So, hidden deep within your dark subconscious

You know that though you made the world seem small

That when you left your home you left your people,

And that’s the biggest sacrifice of…

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Almir Meljovikj said "Magnificent piece of poetry, Diane - I absolutely enjoyed every bit of it. I especially enjoyed the Romantic depictions of nature and landscapes, which seemed to have been followed immediately by a direct shift to a feeling of Modernism - the sense of alienation and loss of identity upon returning. Sort of reminded me of a modern Odysseus figure, grown weary of travel, yet yearning for it again after having discovered the true 'cost of travel'. Thank you and best of luck."
4 months ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor replied saying "Thank you so much for reading and for that very thoughtful and generous comment I really do appreciate it. good luck to you to. Diane"
4 months ago
Meg Malpass said "Hi Diane, Can understand the sadness in this piece. We know of two families where the children have travelled the world with the family attached to our armed forces. Then the army insist they go to boarding school and the family dynamic is changed so much. Enjoyed the poetic style. Would enjoy to hear more poetry from you. Thanks for sharing."
4 months ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor replied saying "Hi Meg, thank you so very much. I haven't put much of my poetry on this site but may if I think it is appropriate. In the meantime I am grateful for your kind comment. - Diane"
4 months ago
Helen Somers said "Hi Diane, this is beautiful and the sentiments are so true. Thank you very much. Helen."
4 months ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor replied saying "Thank you Helen for reading and for taking the time to comment so kindly - Diane"
4 months ago
Suzanne Mays said "I loved this. Quiet, beautiful, a little bit sad. Thank you."
4 months ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor replied saying "thank you so much for reading and for your kind comment."
4 months ago
Desmond Kelly said "Hi Diane. This made me smile. It's very real and I like pieces that have a weary honesty. Well done. Des"
4 months ago
Jay Leffew said "What a pensive piece, and so beautifully written, I loved it, thanks."
4 months ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor replied saying "Thank you so much for your kind comments Jay."
4 months ago
Patsy R Liles said "Hi Diane, This is very nice. As the child of a Forest Ranger we moved almost every year and I remembered it all when I read this. With gratitude for a winsome read. Patsy"
4 months ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor replied saying "I think that in a way your comments have highlighted the message in my piece. When the children were with us it was so much more fun even though we missed the other members of our family but later on it was necessary for them to return to UK to boarding school and some of the magic was lost. We were so lucky, we saw things that we never dreamt we would and wouldn't have given any of it up I don't think but there was an impact on the family and it would be dishonest to pretend there wasn't. You can't have three cherries very often it seems to me but my goodness I do feel as though we had two and a half most of the time. The children benefit to this day from their education and all the experiences they had and what is interesting is that our daughter has very itchy feet but our son is very much a home and hearth person. But there we are I'm rambling again. - take care - Diane"
4 months ago
Patsy R Liles replied saying "Diane, I cannot recall anything but the magaic of those days. My parents made each move a fun thing, pointing out to us the beauty and wonder of that world we moved in. Perhaps nostalgia was the term most needed here. We do move on, but somehow the past is precious and you stirred that up for me. Thanks, Patsy"
4 months ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor replied saying "Hello Patsy - thanks for reading and taking the time to comment. I hope this brought back pleasant memories as well as reflection on the less positives. Take care - Diane"
4 months ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor said "Thanks Adam. Of course the travel that I am thinking about here is not holidays but actual relocation and although I loved being an "expat" the greatest sacrifice was indeed the years away from the family. Thank you as always for your kind comment. - Cheers - Diane"
4 months ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor replied saying "☺"
4 months ago
Adam West replied saying "Ah yes - I should have twigged that, Diane - not one of my more insightful comments. The prose is top-drawer though and I see now it is a competition entry so good luck as always, Adam"
4 months ago
Adam West said "A really excellent piece of writing/prose, though I am not sure I identify with the sentiments, as such - many thanks, Adam"
4 months ago

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