Short Story: The Chase

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Julie Thomson


Carla Britten leads a quiet, secretive life in the Highlands of Scotland until her latent passion for The Chase is re-awakened.


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Carla Britten is the essence of simplicity and elegance. Her lengthy stature is accentuated by the flowing lines of her soft, woollen clothing. Purple, tapered with grey, reflecting her warm skin tones and rose coloured lips. Red glasses, with modern, minimalist frames hinting at joy and confidence. A solitary ring on one hand with a jangling arm of entwining bracelets framing the other. She is confident in her skin and people are drawn to her. What better person to organise your big event - the wedding of the year, the local town twinning receptions, traditional corporate do’s?

“You remind me of someone,” is an often heard comment. “I have one of those faces,” is the often heard reply. Throwing her head back in a hearty laugh, her head for business and attention to detail are subtly masked. Although never ostentatious, she can afford to be relaxed about her daily routines, literally. A single woman with means. In control of those around…

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Jean Beard said ""I thoroughly enjoyed this story especially the unexpected ending.""
11 months ago
Morag Burgon-lyon said "Intriguing story, with a very strong character. I can't help liking her and the ending."
1 year ago
Debbie Johnson said "Wonderful character , loved the story line, and the way you write! Thank you so much for sharing this story!"
1 year ago
Julie Thomson replied saying "Thank you so much for your comments. It was my first dtory and I have been a bit nervous!! I am really pleased you have enjoyed it. Julie"
1 year ago
Adam West said "A new angle here, which I really enjoyed. The pacey writing worked a treat, too."
1 year ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor said "Excellent - Super writing an intriguing and different tale with a clever ending - first class - Thanks for this one - Diane"
1 year ago

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