Short Story: The Birthday Box (part 1)

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Steven Mace


A dark horror story...Lydia receives a present on her birthday which she could never have expected...a weird and dark revenge story of the supernatural


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It was now just one week before Lydia Charlesworth’s seventh birthday. Her parents, James and Victoria Charlesworth, were already getting excited about the big day for their daughter. They were planning a party for Lydia, and many of her friends from primary school would be invited to the house. After the morning spent with her mum and dad and her grandparents, there was a celebration arranged for the children. Lydia’s parents were planning to serve juices for the kids and prepare birthday foods (including jelly and ice cream). Also, they were planning to set up a bouncy castle and paddling pool in the back garden.

Lydia’s father James worked as a museum curator. He earned a generous salary for his position, as he worked with valuable and rare antiquities, and Lydia’s mother didn’t have to work for a living. She was home on that particular morning, a week before her daughter’s birthday, when there was a loud knock at the front…

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Adam West said "I imagined this as a 30 - 60 minute TV drama - not unlike Roald Dahl's Tales of The Unexpected - it certainly had that cinematic feel to it. Very enjoyable creep you it sort of material - many thanks, Adam"
3 weeks ago
Adam West replied saying "I'll look it up, Steve, thanks - hope you get more of your shorts on SB as I think we do justice on the whole to commenting/critiquing the writing on here."
2 weeks ago
Steven Mace replied saying "Thanks Adam! Yes 'Tales of the Unexpected' and 'The Twilight Zone' TV series were definite inspirations for the short story collection that particular tale comes from! There are two more stories I've written that are very influenced by Dahl the writer for adults, 'Hell Hath No Fury' and 'Under Foreign Skies'. I will make them available here at some point. 'UFS' can be read at my Redbubble Page: http://www.redbubble.com/people/stevemace"
2 weeks ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor said "I was surprised to see that there was only one comment on this as I remember reading and enjoying it some time ago. When I read it again today I found it just as chilling and scary. Your imagination is impressive and you have picked a subject that will make many reader shudder. Yes, sorry I didn't comment can't understand why. Glad to read that you are intending to be more active and I look forward to reading more of your work. - Diane"
3 weeks ago
Steven Mace replied saying "Thank you Diane! Although they are useful creatures I have always had a phobia of spiders and thats what inspired this particular story."
3 weeks ago
Jay Leffew said "This moved fast, and the momentum made it feel like a much shorter story than it is. I was gripped, although I'm not a fan of the 'reporting' style of writing, preferring dialogue to help with the action as well. I enjoyed this however, because of the pace as much as the plot; very exciting, and the ending was good too. Thanks."
5 months ago
Jay Leffew replied saying "Great! Very much look forward to more of your work!"
3 weeks ago
Steven Mace replied saying "I added this when I first discovered the site a few months ago and was testing it out, I've been reading a lot of the work here this week and I'm planning to be a lot more active and submit more material, so hopefully I will see more feedback :-)"
3 weeks ago
Jay Leffew replied saying "I was interested to read this again, and it came back fresh after four months. I note you've had 201 views, but I'm still the only one to comment; I think that's weird!"
3 weeks ago
Steven Mace replied saying "Thanks Jay, yes I deliberately made it fast-paced, although there are sparse bits of dialogue. I cut off the end section as it was my first upload attempt on Shortbread and I was worried about length (although to be honest I could have added the whole thing), I'll upload Part 2 at some point, or alternatively you can read the whole story here: http://www.redbubble.com/people/stevemace/writing/6736934-the-birthday-box"
3 weeks ago

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