Short Story: The Audacious Bandolero

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Steve Oliver


A bandit disturbs the journey of a lady...


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It is hot, and dry dust fills the wicked warm air of the high plateau.

An old road meanders through the realm of the high country, and its sun-baked and well-worn tracks, bear the load of an approaching and heavy coach. The coach rattles through the bright blue day with the hooves of the galloping team, lifting a curtain of fine dust in its wake.

A rider emerges from the harsh shadows with a pistol drawn.

"Ho! Ho! …Halt! Or it may be your last breath, my man!"

The driver atop the coach dressed a finely stitched crimson coat, pulls hard upon the team, and applies his body-weight against the pull of the long leather reigns. The coach slides to a halt.

"...Welcome all!"

Gabriel Hortez tips his large red-rimmed sombrero back, and beams a wide smile into the face of the elegant woman, sitting upright in the coach.

"Why, what have we here? …Welcome dear lady! ...And how are we this fine morning? Could it be…

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Jay Leffew said "Mmmm, not bad; - I'm not sure you should be allowed to start a serial here though, it could open the door for others to start their novels on the site..."
2 years ago
Steve Oliver replied saying "Hi Jay -thanks for your kind comments - you might life to try out 'The Song of Tomorrow' ..."
2 years ago
Kate Smart Guest Editor said "oh for heaven's sake Steve! you can't leave it there! I was on the edge of my seat - get writing!! x"
3 years ago
Steve Oliver replied saying "I'm delighted that you were 'drawn into' the tempo of this yarn Kate, and as you rightly spotted I feel there is more to come..."
3 years ago

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