Short Story: Sonnet To A Bag-lady

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Jay Leffew


Mentioning 'Bag-lady' in one of my comments made me think of this; wondering if tramps in general are content in their ways.


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Judy is snug enough, wrapped up in coats,

her hands deftly mittened and hidden in gloves,

along with a load of tramps, scarves round their throats,

she trundles her trolley of trinkets she loves.

Thick socks and wellies too big for her feet;

trousers and skirts wrap her legs, over tights;

more scarves surround her head; - hardly discreet

as she wanders alone along streets hung with lights.

Her Christmas is hard work, and Easter's the same,

but there is companionship under 'the arch'.

She'll pick out a 'trinket' or two for the lame,

the best friend she knows by the name of 'Wee March',

who hangs round the soup kitchen 'waiting for' her;

she hands out a chewy-stick and strokes his fur...

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Andy Bottomley Guest Editor said "Thanks for this Jay. You're right we do carry huge amounts of baggage and the truth is we only realise the true value of something when it is no longer there and very often those things are the 'little' things, the things we take for granted at the time. Thanks for the thought provoking even at this this early hour of the morning (6.55!).........Andy"
4 months ago
Heidi-jo Swain said "Very poignant as I am currently in the midsts of a mammoth reduction of accumulated 'stuff' in our house. How many of us could keep the trinkets we love in just one trolley? We all have far too much baggage don't we? Both material and psychological..."
4 months ago
Jay Leffew replied saying "Too right about the baggage, tho' some 'baggage' will never be forgotten; like the family Bible we used to have, and I never tired of looking through it's magnificent pages, with the most intricate etchings and colour plates of the stories therein. . . . . We were always moving house because of my father being 'posted' in the Army, and suddenly the Bible wasn't there any more... it was one of those massive tomes with two big brass clasps, and mum decided she'd had enough of carting it around. . . . . She had no idea it meant so much to me, and I saw it, weeks later, with a three-figure sum on it, in the centre of an antique store window; - she gave it to a local jumble-sale... we could've done with that money, but I would never have parted with it, and I still haven't forgiven her!"
4 months ago
Jay Leffew said "I didn't know what you meant about the trolley, until I read the other poem, lol! - I feel like a bag-lady sometimes, the way I have to wrap up when going out on my scooter, but thank God I don't have the privation to contend with."
4 months ago
Adam West said "Some nice lines - tidy prose and a another story with a trolley! many thanks, Adam."
4 months ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor said "Nicely done Jay and I like that way that you have avoided any sense of melancholy but still managed to convey the difficulties of her life and indeed the companionship of "others" sharing it. - Diane"
4 months ago

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