Short Story: Some Velvet Morning

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Adam West


Mild to moderately erotic (two chilli, spice rating) Greek tragedy, loosely based upon the story of Phaedra; my version/adaptation inspired by a psychedelic song, Some Velvet Morning, written by Lee Hazlewood, and originally performed by Lee Hazlewood and Nancy Sinatra, in 1967.


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Phaedra stood at her gate, watching the surf, listening to the wind.

When the emerging sun found purchase on the eastern most tip of the mountain range, and the hot wind that followed in the sun's path, blew faster than the Oriole could fly, the strange sounding voices would seek her out. Speak her name.

Phaedra.

A man and a woman, in turn, singing; haunting Phaedra at her gate.

'What does it mean?' Phaedra said, 'are their words... a prophecy?'

Theseus did not answer his wife. In fact, he turned away from her.

Is Phaedra cursed? he thought to himself as he climbed the path that would return him to the cliff top; I hear only the spasmodic wind hustling the gulls off the Aegean, the last gasp of a wave as it dies on the sand.

Theseus sagged. So many troubles beset him.

There was the harvest of course; it had failed once again that year, and the prospect of a worsening famine worried him greatly. So…

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Daniel Murphy said "Some fantastic imagery in here Adam, not least in the captivating title. It's a beautiful image 'some velvet morning'. Keep up the good work!"
4 months ago
Adam West replied saying "Thanks Daniel for reading and commenting - I felt inspired by these words, the song, the legend and whilst I knew the idea of fusing ancient Greece and late sixties California was hardly original (PK Dick does so in VALIS and Radio Free Albemuth) I at least felt pleased with the outcome here - high melodrama with an erotic slant."
4 months ago
James McEwan said "Hi Adam, I've been away for a while and have a lot of reading to catch up on. I found the myth,lust, pathos and revenge entertaining. Happy new year to you and all the other readers."
5 months ago
Adam West replied saying "Thanks James - glad you found this yarn entertaining - sounds like you will have your work cut out catching up - plenty of very good stories in the past few weeks."
5 months ago
Richard Ardus said ""...hedonistic visions of immoral lust..." your style you here at times attained the melodrama of the tragedy Adam! I'm inspired to seek out the story of Phaedra and that's a good thing, so ta. Seasons Greetings Adam and very best wishes for 2012! (and I hope your daughter had a great first term at Uni!)."
5 months ago
Adam West replied saying "Thanks Richard - melodrama is fine so long as it it not unintentional - I really enjoyed marrying the song with the myth and trying to capture a style and am fairly pleased with the outcome. My daughter is in her last year at Uni - my son his last year doing A levels - both, thank goodness are better educated than I! Best wishes to you and your family, too, Richard."
5 months ago
Helen Somers said "First story of yours I have read Adam. It was brilliant! I studied Greek Mythology for a while, Theseus was one of my heroes. You brought my love of the subject right back. Thank you so much. I will be looking out for other stories by you. Helen x"
5 months ago
Adam West replied saying "Many thanks, Helen, for reading and your kind comments. I read a bunch of Greek Mythology when I was about 10 - forgotten most of it - so glad I rekindled your interest. The notion that the 'future' or is it the present, could somehow impact on the past in some nebulous fashion intrigued me. :-) Adam."
5 months ago
Bernice Delucchi said "Wow - this is a fantastic story and extremely well-written! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this!"
5 months ago
Bernice Delucchi replied saying "Absolutely, Adam - it's almost like food for the creative soul!"
5 months ago
Adam West replied saying "Very kind of you, Bernice - it is such a lovely feeling isn't it when someone says they thoroughly enjoyed something you have written?"
5 months ago
Desmond Kelly said "Adam, this was fantastic writing. You really captured the strangeness and twisted reality an event like this entertains. Really well done. I award you five stars. Des"
5 months ago
Adam West replied saying "Cheers Desmond for the five star rating - I'm glowing! I wrote this on the back of reading These Demented Lands, Alan Warner's follow up to his début novel; strange is as strange does - I think?"
5 months ago
Jay Leffew said "Ah me! Unbridled lust such as this has to be doomed; I'm surprised Phaedra didn't think about the possible consequences. I was never sure where history ended and myth began, but I knew I didn't like the dryness of history, and yet I enjoyed myth. Doesn't make sense does it? Needless to say magic is the key, but I still don't know if 'Paris and Helen' are myth or fact? Good stuff this, more please!"
5 months ago
Adam West replied saying "Many thanks Jay for reading and commenting - I think you summed it up with 'unbridled lust' - I must have and damn the consequences was how I imagined Phaedra's mindset once I had read the legend. I might try for another of these because I enjoy putting aside convention and writing with freedom."
5 months ago
Patsy R Liles said "Ah, Adam. Greek tragedy. Well done. You captured the muses and the sea, and the daffodills, and the tragedy very well. Good characterization. I too enjoyed this story. Patsy"
5 months ago
Adam West replied saying "Thanks Patsy - I first heard the song in the film adaptation of Alan Warner's first novel, Morvern Callar - it was very striking and used to great effect, in a supermarket of all places. A band called Vanilla Fudge covered it a couple of years later in a bluesy psychedelic style - can't see Beyonce or Leona Lewis adding it to their repertoire...but you never know? Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for reading as always, Adam"
5 months ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor said "To Inform, educate and entertain - that's the BBC isn't it - well I think you accomplished all three here. I really enjoyed that - thank you - Diane"
5 months ago
Adam West replied saying "LOL with a triple DDD as Kate Smart would say. My primary school (well, it was middle school back then) had a complete wotsit of them and I read them all aged about 10! I was fascinated - don't think they were as graphic as mine tho' glad you enjoyed ATB - Adam"
5 months ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor replied saying "Don't know about the Attenborough thing but I have tried several times to get to grips with some mythology (I don't think my school knew how to spell it let alone teach any of it) but I do find it hard going. if only it was as enjoyable and entertaining as yours. It does fascinate me, I think I could happily go along with a lorra lorra Gods. Mind you then we have Dun Manifestin don't we and Offler the Crocodile God. ooook"
5 months ago
Adam West replied saying "BBC eh? I'm coming over all David Attenborough Stephen Fry all of a sudden am I? :-) Thanks Diane - glad you err...enjoyed it, thanks Adam"
5 months ago

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