Short Story: Some Kind Of Hero

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Willie Douglas


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Gerald Novotny, widowed husband, father, Command Sergeant Major emeritus, retired CEO, and eccentric extraordinaire, had enlisted in the Army during the Second World War, desiring to serve his country and become an example for other German rooted, decadent youths trapped on the harsh streets of New York City. He accomplished his mission with flying colors: The prestigious Medal of Honor hung around his neck before his twentieth birthday. That was more than sixty years ago.

Harold Davenport, ambitious freshman reporter for the New Yorker Magazine, was assigned to write an article about any native New York City immigrant who had accomplished great feats in America. By means of a keyboard and a mouse, he selected Gerald’s name from a web-site of distinguished medalist with the simplicity of pulling a piece of caramel coated popcorn from out of a box of Cracker Jacks; and with the same ease, he located him at his…

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Richard Ardus said "...aside the right side of his head...? Why not simply on or to the side of his head? I enjoyed this and found the end bizzare rather than humerous but that's the nature of that desease!"
11 months ago
Willie Douglas replied saying "Thanks, Richard. My slow response to comments stem from my limited access to the internet, but am most grateful for your advice, and the story would have flowed smoother with, " on, or to the side of his head", as you well noted. Alzheimer's is a bizzare desease, and I desired to capture the tragic descent from greatness that many of it's victims suffer. Thanks again."
11 months ago
Meg Malpass said "Very 'near the knuckle' for us at the moment as my father-in-law suffers the same as is at the same stage. Sad yet if we couldn't laugh now and again I think we would go under. Thanks for sharing and good luck with the voting."
11 months ago
Willie Douglas replied saying "Meg, Thanks for reading. Alzheimer's is a demoralizing desease. In SKOH, I wanted to capture the great height that some of its victims rise to before plummeting. I am most compassionate to your father-in-laws condition. Thanks again."
11 months ago
Alex Mason said "500 words is always a tough little word limit - but the amount of raw detail you manage to pack into this piece is deeply impressive - there's around 8 stories in one - covering so many different facets that it serves as a perfect example of how to cram as much as physically possible into a small space. I would love to see what you could do with a word limit of 100! Indeed, there are places where you could remove words to make it even more succinct - for example the first line you say 'widowed husband' - you could save a word and just use 'widower' instead. And i feel that the last sentence, despite having the coup-de-grace so to speak, isn't needed - i felt that the old man attacking the reporter would have made a much better ending on it's own, end it on a bang!"
11 months ago
Willie Douglas replied saying "Thanks, Mason. I find these 500 word limits very challenging. In comparison to the first story I published on the site - in the vacinity of 8,000 words - my new stories are much shorter; I have learned that it is more effective and effiecient to economize. Often, I find that I attempt to incorporate too much story without enough finesse or style in these F500 competitions, so I am happy to hear I was somewhat successful with SKOH. Using 'widower' would have definately economized the story even further. I re-read it and agree that it would have been more powerful without the last sentence justification. Thanks for reading, and offering good writing advice."
11 months ago
Fran Strahan said "Powerful story with a lot packed into it, detailing a great mans life. Alzheimers is a terrible affliction. Well written and dealt with, with a touch of humour. Thanks."
11 months ago
Willie Douglas replied saying "Thanks, Fran. As I have shared, Alzheimers is personal to me; I have suffered its destruction through family members. I am glad that you see the humor as I intended - more of a painreliever instead of mockery. As represented in the story, the desease has no repsect of person; both family members were very prosperous and affluent in life. Thanks!"
11 months ago
Winifred Marzella said "I agree Alzheimers is a very degrading disease robbing one of dignity. Can equate with this to a certain degree as my mother has Dementia. Loved the ending!"
11 months ago
Winifred Marzella replied saying "Thanks Willie"
11 months ago
Willie Douglas replied saying "Though she has passed away, my grandmother suffered from Alzheimer's - rather shall I say that we suffered, meaning she and all of us that loved her; another very close family memeber is showing signs. As I tried to represent in the story, they both were well esteem individuals in life, and it is tragic to watch this desease shred this away. Thanks for understanding, and reading, and I have the uttermost comapssion and sympathy for you and your mother in regards to her Dementia. Well wishes!"
11 months ago
Jay Leffew said "Oh dear. I'm not sure 'exhaustively' was quite the right word but that's quite a shock, and I'm sorry I'm laughing. I wonder if Kevin knew that';s what would happen...?"
11 months ago
Willie Douglas replied saying "Alzheimer's is such a spiritually depleting desease, especially for the loved one's of those afflicted. I am one of those loved ones. Thanks for discovering the wee bit of humor I threw in to spread a sheet of laughter over a bed of despair; I was also tickled while writing that part of the story. As always, thanks for reading, Jay!"
11 months ago

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