Short Story: Sin City Sinner

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Don Lister


Billy-Rae was lucky enough to be given a second chance - but too stupid to take it.


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Totally oblivious to all the ‘yahoo’s’ and high fives reverberating across the expansive floor of the casino, an unkempt, dishevelled little man stood in front of a roulette wheel as it spun round and round on its axis. Leaning forward, and craning his scrawny neck in eager anticipation, he watched the croupier send the little white ball careering helter-skelter in the opposite direction to the wheel’s spin.

Billy Rae Brown was the scruffy man’s name, and his bloodshot eyes swivelled round and round in their sockets as they tried to follow the path of the ball, while at the same time in desperate hope he crossed every dirty digit on his smelly, unwashed body,

He grimaced as the ball clattered along the ridges of the wheel when it slowed, and gasped as it seemed to hesitate before finally coming to rest in the green bed of number Zero.

Billy Rae jumped up and down whooping with delight and causing a cocktail waitress to…

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Jay Leffew said "Grrrr! Diane said it! What an idiot! How do so many get drawn in so deep? I have a horror of addiction of any kind, but this is the most insidious. Well done... shudder..."
9 months ago
Don Lister replied saying "Thanks Jay. I agree entirely with you and Dianne. Addiction is horrible. Having been across 'the pond' to visit LV, I saw many people fitting Billy-Rae's description on the downtown streets, and I saw security shoo them away from begging at the casino's entrances. I must admit that I fell for it more than once however, and shelled out many a dollar bill to them - but, as the saying goes...'There but for fortune'... regards, Don."
9 months ago
Don Lister said "Thanks for reading Dianne. I have been to Las Vegas several times (I like to jet into there and use it as a base for exploring California, Grand Canyon etc) and although LV is a clean city, I have seen men and women down-and-outs there who had probably been 'raped' by the gambling bug. Billy-Rae was one of these."
9 months ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor replied saying "On the one hand I have sympathy with addicts and obviously your Billy-Rae was addicted but he didn't seem to have been able to hang onto much of his humanity did he. Only a short time after his good fortune he was looking down on people in the place he had just left. I liked your story, I didn't like Billy-Rae. You had drawn him so very well that I actually reacted to him, that is a gold star for you and a treat for me. - Cheers - Diane"
9 months ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor said "Oh dear I hope that I usually try to see the best in people but this guy doesn't seem to have any best does he. Maybe he got his just desserts in the desert !! Neat and tight - good story - Diane"
9 months ago

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