Short Story: Silent Night

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Alone at home, hearing all kinds of sounds.


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There it was again. The sound that had woken her from deep slumber just a minute before. The scratching, rustling sound in the darkness, just outside the window. And it definitely wasn't a branch this time. Dan had cut that back last week. Sarah was comfortably snuggled under her blankets, in bed in the dark lonely room. Her eyes already adjusted as much as possible to the darkness, while she was lying still on the spot as if frozen in time, staring at the window. She could feel her heart beat rising, and she was sure it was beating so hard that she could feel it pounding on her nightgown. She cursed under her breath at herself, why did she have to insist on staying at home while Dan helped her sister with her car. Always everyone's handy man and it was starting to take a toll on her patience. She needed him here with her. Another scratching, rustling sound…

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Jay Leffew said "Oh dear. One might've hoped she'd have a sense of humour; didn't she notice the puppy?. I can echo all tat Diane said though, otherwise, the fear was palpable; great writing, apart from the misplaced letters etc. afore-mentioned."
1 year ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor said "This captured exactly the panic that we are all able to conjure up when in a vulnerable condition. I think it could do with a bit of a polish here and there but the idea was very good and the tension build up was well done. The ending - I don't want to spoil this but it was clever and a lovely way to round up the whole thing, I loved the eggs and the "comment". - Thanks - Diane"
1 year ago

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