Short Story: Salt And Sea Campion

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Stephen Hobbs


On a beautiful summer day, a young woman goes for a walk and meets a stranger with a troubled past.


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Charlie regretted being so stubborn. It was hot, too hot to walk to the castle but to turn back now would be to prove Mike right. His words rang in her head, "You're mad," he'd said. "It's a two mile walk and it's blazing hot. You were complaining yesterday that it wasn't sunny enough, and today when you should be sitting and drinking wine, you want to go for a walk. You are...officially... bonkers." Sod him, she thought. It was a nice day. She wanted to walk to the castle and that's what she was going to do. There would be a breeze on the cliff tops, and the grass would be soft and forgiving. It was as she told Mike, a 'Lou Reed' day. Perfect.

Mike was right. It was too hot and after ten minutes she wished that she'd brought some water with her. She stopped to catch her breath and shading her eyes, looked out across the bay.…

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Jean Beard said ""I loved this but I wanted more.""
10 months ago
Ahmed-hamid Woody Bagala-alina said "Reading this at night gave me a few creeps, especially after Charlie straightens and notices the woman(?) miles away! Great write, man. Bless!"
10 months ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor said "A lovely mystery story with a tinge of sadness, romance and perhaps a touch of horror really. Nice descriptive passages and a great sense of tension - thanks - Diane One little tip though - don't set off on a two hour cliff top walk in flip flops - very naughty :-)"
10 months ago
Adam West said "I agree that this was understated and all the more creepy for it - the imagery thoughout added to the sense of foreboding. Similies a bit cliched - aminor criticiism, but on the whole the narrative was really good and the dialogue, excellent...many thanks Adam"
10 months ago
Heidi-jo Swain said "I liked this very much and yes, like Jay, it gave me a shudder as well. It reminded me of a walk I took some years ago to see an abandoned house perched on top of some cliffs in Aberdeenshire. Despite the heat of the sun there was something very chilling and eerie about the house and your story reminded me of that. I found I read the story very quickly, wondering all the while if what I thought might happen would turn out to be more or less horrific than what you had decided to write - nice sense of suspense!"
10 months ago
Jay Leffew said "Oo-er; very creepy. Nicely written understatement, short and to the point. Thanks for the shudder..."
10 months ago

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