Short Story: Rock Slide

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An adventure story of a lucky man finding out what is really important to him.


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The early morning sky was reflecting pink and red over the ocean where the sun would eventually push itself up and climb over the horizon. It was soon to be another beautiful day in the tropical Caribbean paradise of Isla San Antonio, when suddenly; the tranquility was replaced by a deafening sound of rumbling and crashing. The morning stillness was shattered in the natural harbor where the sailboats swayed on their anchor lines. At 6:20 AM, the monkeys in the trees started howling and hundreds of tropical birds were screaming a wake-up call for the six sailboats. Thirty seconds later, a one meter wave was sent surging across the harbor as tons of; rock, soil, trees, a concrete walkway and a statue of the Virgin Mary came crashing down. The hungry sea devoured it instantly.

Half of the boats quickly pulled up their anchors and left fearing an aftershock. This rock slide…

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Fran Strahan said "You write, I think, with a knowledge of sailing and diving - did you find any buried treasure though :-) Great story, very gripping towards the end. Will he make it?...... Thanks, enjoyed the read."
12 months ago
Jay Leffew said "Ah, such things as dreams are made of. Will he go back one day? There's the possibility of funding a project with what he could make on his first item of salvage perhaps? . . . . . Nice one, but you didn't need anything between the words '...when suddenly the tranquility...', let alone a semi-colon, which is usually used to replace a conjunction. Then you needed to say, '...he shone his light...', normally you'd use 'shined' for something like, '...he shined his shoes...', then his shoes would've 'shone'."
12 months ago
Lawrence Shaffer replied saying "Hey thanks Jay, I'll look into changing those things. Cheers Larry"
12 months ago

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