Short Story: Return To Orlos

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Diane Dickson


This is the sequel to The Last Night. It is forbidden to read this one first. Orlos is trapped in suspended animation, the only thing that can save the Kingdom is to renew the dragon spirit.


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It shouldn’t have been possible, there was no way that it could have ever been planned, but such is the wonder of the multiverse. Alphine had laid her egg many years before. It was before the dreadful Dragon Light Night which saw the great Kingdom of Orlos plunged into a state of suspended animation.

As all female dragons know, as they are all taught from childhood, there is only ever one egg, it is more precious than gold, it is more valuable than all the wondrous jewels in the treasure house at the palace. It is quite simply priceless.

The eggs must be kept safe, they must be hidden and they must be secret and it is the responsibility of the mother dragon to ensure all goes well. When the time came for her to lay her egg Alphine went to the foothills of the Iron Mountains and battled through the mighty…

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Adam West Guest Editor said "Some of the imagery you created here, Diane, is simply wondrous - in particular the twins waiting and their songs and their struggle to reach the surface and so on. Full of richly descriptive passages Return To Orlos leaves enough to the imagination to warrant a five-star rating - edited superbly well, also - many thanks, Adam"
1 year ago
Adam West Guest Editor replied saying "Your welcome, Diane - I try to be frank and I know at times I don't say as much as I might like that when I think some constructive criticism might help - always easier to heap praise, of course, but nevertheless, I am not trying to flatter - just being that bit more honest than if I didn't like the writing - if you see what I mean -ATB - Adam"
1 year ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor replied saying "That is such a very kind and generous comment Adam that you make me blush. Thanks so much for reading and commenting on this little flight of fancy. Aren't you just loving this whole swarm of dragons on the site these days?"
1 year ago
Jay Leffew said "I sensed a chill of impending disaster in those last sentences. Amongst all growth and renewal of hope there is always the 'what if?' factor which should never be ignored, and you've introduced it as a cliff-hanger, which I hope you will resolve in your next enchanting tale...? . . . . . I feel I'm getting to know 'Dragon Lore' very well through your writings, and think every town should have one resident, but as there are only ever one hundred, world wide, it seems those privileged few should be more appreciative when they discover one in their vicinity."
1 year ago
Jay Leffew replied saying "Oh, thank goodness. I like that. I was terribly worried that they might be on the critically endangered list, though of course their magic could never die, could it? I might just be weakened surely?"
1 year ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor replied saying "Well, I have a vague sense of the way this may be going but we will have to see when finger ends hit plastic (as always with me - totally without discipline) The one hundred dragon rule doesn't apply to worlds only to Kingdoms, therefore (in my realities) a world could have several Kingdoms ergo numerous dragon hundreds - Isn't it wonderful when you can make it all up, I can understand why Sir Terry Pratchett is such a lovely man living his life amongst such stuff. Thanks for the comment Jay."
1 year ago
Patsy R Liles said "This is so soft and sweet, Diane. At least they were the words that came instantly as I read this. Yet, wonderful. The last line is warning to all of us, isn't it. It's as if reading this I can be rest assured that life will go on forever. . .Thanks for this one. Look forward to more. Patsy Liles"
1 year ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor replied saying "Thank you for that really lovely comment Patsy, I am attached to the dragons in Orlos now I'm afraid. I'm hoping there may be more. - thanks again - Diane"
1 year ago

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