Short Story: Reflections Of A Life

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Adrian Ford


This piece was initially written as an exercise for a Creative Writing group –the exercise being the use of metaphor, simile and alliteration - but its own inertia took over.... The main ‘character’ is the River Forth in Scotland. AF February 2012


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Greeted by the saluting sentinels that are the islands of Inchcolm and Inchkeith, you reach the serenity of your saturnine estuary.

‘You have time to tarry awhile and reflect; take a look behind, in Time and Space, before it’s too late,’ I said.

Eyes might be blinded by the crimson, setting sun but your senses and memories are undiminished. You remember your ancient, amorphous, ancestral home where you forged your identity. Once a mere babbling brook, you soon swelled with kith and kin to form a true force in nature, gravity guiding your crashing from side to side, seeking cracks and crannies to carve your own path inexorably to your destiny.

‘Yes, I made my mark in those darting, early phases, innocent in youth, undaunted, unaware of the hard-work to be accomplished in the future. I was not afraid.’

‘It was not long before you were fully formed,’ I said, ‘yet still young enough to…

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Diane Dickson Guest Editor said "I thought this was quite beautiful prose I really did. The quality of the writing carried one along just as the river flowed. I may be being silly here but it was salmon wasn't it (sorry if I have misunderstood) Really super. - Diane"
3 months ago
Adrian Ford replied saying "I am really pleased you enjoyed the story, Diane. I am always mesmerised when looking at the sea or a river; one's thoughts take on a life of their own. We see and feel different things according to who we are and what influences us. There is no question of misunderstanding, Diane, for you it was salmon! And what a story they could tell! Good to have your comments. - Adrian"
3 months ago
Adam West said "Kesey did something very similar to this in Sometimes A Great Notion - streams coming together to form a river and its course narrated to the sea - I enjoyed your similes, metaphors and alliterations, Adrian, they conjured up a sense of awe and majesty, power and beauty, ultimately, a sense that there is no going back - well written, many thanks, Adam."
3 months ago
Adrian Ford replied saying "Thanks for your kind comments, Adam. Greatly appreciated - Adrian"
3 months ago

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