Short Story: Peace Maker

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A young squaw falls in love with a prisoner of war and sets in motion events to shake her territory for decades


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All the braves were out hunting that afternoon when the raiding party arrived. Merciless Bear, the chief of the tribe, had ordered all able bodied men and strong squaws to accompany the hunting party as they needed to store a lot of meat for the coming winter. The Shaman had warned them it would be the worst cold season since White Mountain had shed its powder and buried a whole tribe so many moons back.

So when the horsemen raided, they had already scouted the village and established that there would be little resistance. They killed the old men and squaws, raped the young ones and packed all the food they could carry, tying any animals fit to travel on the rumps of their horses or on the one wagon they had left atop a hill overlooking the village. There were a few goats, two donkeys and several ponies not yet fit…

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Jay Leffew said "Very uncompromising, and a little puzzling, with a couple of mistakes which made me smile, the most amusing being 'sawed' instead of 'sewed'. I don't understand why this 'long nose' would be so keen on killing someone he'd discovered was so sweet, and willing, I thought they often took squaws back with them to very successful partnerships? I also thought they were known as 'Long-arms', or 'Pale-faces'. A rather brutal story again, and well portrayed."
1 year ago
Ahmed-hamid Woody Bagala-alina replied saying "Thanks, Jay...human beings are very hard to understand, I try to portray that hardness sometimes, hence. Ha ha ha, `sawed`, can you imagine? My English students might start to commit suicide at the rate at which I am murdering the English language! Thanks for the feed, and for stopping by, Bless!"
1 year ago

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