Short Story: Paw Prints In The Snow

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Helen Somers


A little girl faces the worst Christmas ever. Her dog has run away. (Don't worry, it has a happy ending!!)


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Holly and her family moved into their new house, much closer to where her father worked, the Saturday before Christmas.

Although she hadn't wanted to leave her classmates, Holly had put on a brave face - after all she still had her best friend Tippy with her.

As the men struggled with furniture and Holly's mother and father brought in boxes of china, Tippy ran around, exploring his new surroundings, getting under everyone's feet.

'Let's put him outside for a while' Holly's father said, having tripped over the little dog for the umpteenth time.

Holly opened the back door and went into the garden. She found an old ball, covered in damp leaves and threw it for Tippy, who brought it back for her to throw again, never tiring of the game. Holly did, though. She was also very cold, so she went inside and her mother, having now found the kettle, made everyone a hot drink.

Half an hour later, having warmed up, the…

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Meg Malpass said "Lovely story. Just enough detail to empathise with Holly. Thank you."
5 months ago
Linda Bond said "aaahhh! I sooo wanted Tippy to come home and he did. A magical story Helen."
5 months ago
Jay Leffew said "Young children everywhere would feel the anxiety and misery, and then the wonderful relief this story brings. It might remind them to take extra care of their own pets, which can only be a good thing; - I hope Holly doesn't catch a chill?"
5 months ago
Patsy R Liles said "Delightful. The child in me wanted this very thing to happen. And it did. Thanks to you. Lovely. Patsy"
5 months ago
Adam West said "Very enjoyable read - carefully handled, many thanks, Adam"
5 months ago
Adam West replied saying "I imagined you had had a dog, Helen - it showed in the way you handled this story with empathy - best wishes, Adam"
5 months ago
Helen Somers replied saying "Thanks Adam. I used to have a dog called Tippy so it gave me an opportunity to write about him!! Not that he went missing at Christmas though."
5 months ago
Christine Human said "one for Pets Weekly? enjoyable and although predictable my mother in law would love it."
5 months ago
Helen Somers replied saying "Thanks Christine. My first ever children's story!!! Did it as a challenge."
5 months ago

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