Short Story: Paper Boat

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Paper boats make us think our childhood.


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Paper boat makes me smile.

It has become part of my life. Has become part of life of many children, either. When we were children we usually fold used piece of paper to make one and let it float inside a basin with water. Then we blow air to make it sail round its limited ocean until it soaks and slowly sinks and then we could not make it move anymore. Again, we build another one until we give up thrusting it with the air from our lungs.

So when rainy days came, I was so merry.

Before the heavy downpour, I would tell Ayan, my playmate and neighbour, to wait for my boat to sail past him. He would agree and his tarred and damaged front teeth showed up. He had nothing to disagree for. The rainwater run along the passageway down our doorway to Ayan's doorway.

Now, up there in the overcast heavens…

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Jay Leffew said "I am puzzled as to why you should think this story might not be suitable for children? There is nothing horrible or corrupting here, and 'though it might be difficult for a child to understand the underlying message, it is a pure, clean and charming tale of two boys and their paper boats. . . . . I get the suggestion of a moral in that humans are not made of paper, 'though they might sometimes feel that fragile. Good one Melford."
1 year ago
Melford Maderazo Guest Editor replied saying "Hello Jay! It was just a mistake of tagging this story unsuitable for children. I've written this actually in my writing desk via mobile internet. This story is the one I submitted for the Comp, but unfortunately its word count exceeded the limit and my anxiousness to submit it made me forget checking it. Thanks for the feedback, dear."
1 year ago
Adam West Guest Editor said "Wonderfully evocative observational piece laced with other strands - thoughts and recollections coloured by storytelling of childhood legend. I know this was intended for the competition, Melford, but think it is best as it stands and not cut down to 500 words - arguably your most accomplished writing to date - many thanks, Adam."
1 year ago
Melford Maderazo Guest Editor replied saying "Hi Adam! I'm very glad you added me as favourite author and Paper Boat as one of your favourite story. I feel I've won in the Comp. he-he. You're right, this story is intended for the Comp. I've written this in my writing desk last week by just using my mobile internet. I thought the word count did not exceed 500 and I was too anxious to submit it, then I just learned it was disqualified. he-he. Thanks Adam!"
1 year ago

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