Short Story: Paint Your Wagon

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Dot Cook


The gypsy kids Dorothy and William are at it again. Their wagon is leaking and it needs a paint job. How will they do it?


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Paint Your Wagon

‘Ouch!’ said Dorothy, ‘Wot you doing, William? Wetting the bed?’

She gave him a push and he rolled across the floor of the caravan and woke up, grumbling.

‘No, no,’ he protested, ‘I aren’t doing nothing. It’s the rain, can’t you ‘ear it? Wot you woke me up for? Just move over. Didn’t Nonna give you a tin to catch them drips?’

‘Yes, but they make a noise drip, drip, dripping all the time an’ they’re keepin’ me awake, as well as making it all wet.’ Dorothy was close to tears but didn’t want to add to her discomfort.

‘We’ll have to try and mend the wagon,’ declared William. ‘’Ere, put this sack over yer ‘ead and try to go back to sleep.’

With Nonno, their grandfather, being away, it was difficult to see how the gypsy kids could repair the roof of their wagon. It needed roofing felt and that costs money. They were tired…

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Joseph Chamberlain said "Not a bad little tale but needs a lot of tidying up."
12 months ago
John Slater said "My family were travelling showmen/women. Enjoyed reading this a lot. Thanks for posting."
1 year ago
Jay Leffew said "These two kids are a joy; their resourcefulness is inspirational, and I'm finding this 'series' one I look forward to seeing more of, thanks."
1 year ago

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