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Steve Oliver


This is intended as a sequel to the story 'New Blood'. Duke Lancaster's luck changes, and he is offered a job, but is this the luck he really bargained for?


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A tall shadow passed by the opaque window of the saloon and the slim figure of Duke Lancaster entered. He looked nervously over his shoulder at the still swinging doors behind him, and stepped up to the long bar. Peering across the bar to the long face of the man cleaning glasses beyond its reflective surface asked, "…Hey, know of any work here abouts?"

The barkeeper answered without looking up. "Hear tell the Marshal was lookin’ for riders back along, but none of them fellas came back – well at least not in one piece that is… You might want to speak to that fella over there, he’s been talkin’ to folks in town," and he nodded his head across the saloon.

Across the drab saloon, a small man sat patiently at a table that he had made his own. Occasionally he glanced up, wiped his thick spectacles, and studied the face of the granddaughter clock that stood ticking in the corner.

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Steven Mace said "This is high quality writing, I don't often read western fiction but have considered writing some myself, I really enjoyed it."
3 weeks ago
Steve Oliver said "Hi Kate, Thank you for your generous and supportive comments, and pleased that you liked the sequel to 'New Blood'. I am afraid that there have been one or two adverse remarks regarding serialisation on this writing format, and so I am not sure anthing further would be appropriate? best regards Steve"
3 months ago
Kate Smart replied saying "That's a shame Steve. Your earlier, audioed Western serial was enjoyed by many and I can't think why this wouldn't be as well. Entertaining stuff. Take care, Kate."
3 months ago
Kate Smart said "I was browsing and found this one Steve - sorry to have missed it till now. I always enjoy your Western stories and this one didn't disappoint. Great atmosphere and dialogue as ever. Good stuff. Will now look for the sequel!"
3 months ago
Steve Oliver said "I am pleased that you indulged this genre Diane, and that you liked this particular story - thanks for reading..."
1 year ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor said "Very vivid characterisation here, i could easily imagine the scenes in the saloon and the interviews. I don't know how accurate the references to horse flesh are but they certainly had me convinced. The dialogue was fun and as the last time I enjoyed this total deviation from my usual reading choice. - Thanks - Diane"
1 year ago
Steve Oliver said "Hi Jay, thank you for taking the time to comment. I am not sure what you mean exactly, but I feel the proof of the pudding would be in the eating!"
1 year ago
Steve Oliver said "Hi Jay, thank you for reading and commenting on this particular piece. I do however feel that your conclusion to avoid my work entirely is a little unfair, as my submissions generally quite varied in content, and several are quite short, which you may find more suited to your particular preferences."
1 year ago
Jay Leffew said "Not fair! This is an incident from a novel, not a short story; it should at least feel complete as an episode, and it doesn't. 'New Blood' was a little better in that respect; now we have to wait again for the 'serial' to continue, and I don't appreciate serials. It's a promising story-line, but I'm afraid I won't be following it because my memory is too short to cope, and I don't like having to go back to what has gone before to understand. Good luck with it; I'm sure most others will enjoy it better; I just have to learn to avoid your work I guess..."
1 year ago
Jay Leffew replied saying "For some reason your reply to this comment hasn't come through on my 'recent activities', and it's just by chance I was checking through the 'action' scene, and had another look at my reactions to this one.........You're right of course; I've read several of your stories and been happy with them, what I meant really, was that I can't be sure I'm going to be happy with them, and it's too late once I've embarked on one, to be sure it will satisfy my proclivities... My loss I guess..."
1 year ago

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