Short Story: Never Too Vintage

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Charlena Miller


This story reminds one to never say never, and that one is never too old for love. If it is meant to be, an opportunity will arise for two hearts to find their way back to one another.


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He was new to this Facebook thing. His granddaughter, Ali, had insisted on setting him up so he could keep in touch with friends and family.

‘No one sends letters any longer, Granpa. You stay in touch online,’ she explained.

Ali was right. Only a handful of Jack’s friends sent Christmas cards in the post. Jack was Facebook friends now with more than one hundred people and had begun to enjoy the trivial tidbits and photos that came across his newsfeed.

The photo in the latest update was of a young girl he didn’t recognize, but the top she was wearing caught Jack’s eye. Were they making clothes like that again? It was possible, he thought. Styles came and went and came around again. Jack clicked on the Facebook photo to enlarge it and display the additional comments.

‘Cool top’ one commenter wrote. ‘Where’d you get it?’

‘Vintage shop on Etsy. Cool stuff. Check it out,’…

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Adam West Guest Editor said "Very enjoyable read, Charlena - loved the idea of a silver surfer being shown the ropes by his granddaughter and embracing the phenomenon that is FB - many thanks and good luck, Adam"
1 year ago
Charlena Miller replied saying "Thanks Adam. I have heard these stories about people connecting again and with the prompt and its integration of social media, the direction for the piece came clear. I wanted to write it from the woman's perspective but that version didn't cooperate, if you know what I mean. :-)"
1 year ago
Andy Bottomley Guest Editor said "Hi Charlena, I was going to write this comment last night but a bottle of red got between me and the keyboard! Then this morning I found that you had very kindly posted a comment on my 'Storyteller's Tale'. Thank you for your story I did very much enjoy it as you successfully managed to draw out the truth that small incidently things of the past can so often hold our attention in the present with the hope that they can influence the future, which in this case it did. This world could do with a few more happy endings - thanks for this one.....Andy"
1 year ago
Andy Bottomley Guest Editor replied saying "'Not heavy at all'....it was for me!!!...trust me! Andy"
1 year ago
Charlena Miller replied saying "Andy--not too heavy at all. Prefer straight talk vs small talk. Get to the heart of the matter. :-) ~Charlena"
1 year ago
Andy Bottomley Guest Editor replied saying "Hi Charlena, Happy endings aren't always possible are they because very often if they're forced they distort the story. All we are are narrators and very often we are not 'making the story up' but merely 'telling the story'. However if there is the opportunity, and we want to take it, then for the sake of the reader we need to go for it. Blimey, that was a bit 'heavy' wasn't it - I don't know where that came from!....Sorry about that....Andy"
1 year ago
Charlena Miller replied saying "Hi Andy-Thank you for reading and commenting. I sometimes don't want to write happy endings because they can be sappy, but I kind of feel that maybe you're right. Maybe it is a time right now where a few more of these are needed. Sometimes it's nice to imagine that it all works out in the end when the world is so chaotic. :-)"
1 year ago
Helen Somers said "Lump in the throat story. Very well written."
1 year ago
Charlena Miller replied saying "Thank you Helen. Means a lot to know that it connected."
1 year ago
Barbara Timmons said "Thanks for this very nice story. It was so sweet"
1 year ago
Charlena Miller replied saying "Thank you for reading Barbara!"
1 year ago
Jay Leffew said "Apart from misplacing 'try harder', this was sensitively written, and a lovely ending; I think it'll do well in the comp. Good luck."
1 year ago
Charlena Miller replied saying "Thank you, Jay, for the encouragement. I intended 'try harder' to come across as part of his speech pattern, but I don't want a reader to stumble on it either. I'll keep that in mind."
1 year ago
Patsy R Liles said "I love happy endings. Thanks for this one. Patsy Liles"
1 year ago
Charlena Miller replied saying "Thank you, Patsy, for the comments! Sometimes I think happy endings are 'too much' but this one seemed to want one... know what I mean? ;-)"
1 year ago
Suzanne Mays Guest Editor said "So enjoyed this story, it made me feel good. I so identified with him trying to get a handle on Facebook but then catching up to her again. Thanks."
1 year ago
Charlena Miller replied saying "Suzanne-so glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for leaving a comment. It's my first story to submit so it's really nice to hear feedback. Thanks."
1 year ago
Charlena Miller said "Thank you so much for reading and for the feedback. I am glad you enjoyed it and that you also found the story resonated with what is currently happening. That's encouraging as it was important to me to find a way to weave the story of people and things (the top) that are considered vintage but are still full of happiness, joy, life, stories yet to be lived, and bring new life to them all by connecting them through modern forms of social communication. Thanks, Charlena"
1 year ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor said "This story actually made me say "AWWW" it was so lovely. "Happiness lived in that top" that was one of many super lines. I thought it was very well written and constructed. I think it was also very near the truth of what is happening around us now, you certainly do hear over and over about people meeting up, getting together etc. Not all of them are happy endings and as I wouldn't want to be a spoiler I'll say no more. Well done with this - Diane"
1 year ago

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