Short Story: Mottie

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Another personal one, for my mother's cat who passed away.


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When you were born you were different, disabled and no one wanted you

I kept you for that reason, even so my love for you was nothing else than true

You became my darling, my favourite and your love showed me you knew

Through the years, so small you stayed, so fragile you were, my worries for you grew

More tragedy was on your path when you got blood pressure and lost your sight,

So sick you were though my love and voice you have never forgot

Even with all these things nothing got in your way, a real fighter you remained

Victory was yours in life, love and with other cats winning battles you gained.

With age, so beautiful you became, bigger and stronger at last

So loveable you remained, oh how fast the years have passed.

More than often you spoke to me, loved me in ways no one understood

One last time you did that for me, and now…

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Jay Leffew said "Lovely sentiments. I notice you have no 'metre' as such, so I think you could've said '...high blood pressure...', - we all have 'blood pressure'. . . . . It is dreadfully sad to lose someone you love; I mourn the loss of my greyhounds still, after four years, and feel bad that I don't think about the cats I've lost, so much. However, since the only animal I have in the house now isn't mine but thinks she is, I know I'll mourn Fifi for a lot longer when she goes."
3 months ago

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