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Adam West


A fictional account surrounding true events that took place in Sheffield, Yorkshire, in March 1864, a disater, which quickly became known as the Great Inundation. It claimed around 250 lives. Little has been written about the events, before and after Dale Dyke Dam collapsed, since Samuel Harrison, Editor-Proprietor of The Sheffield Times published his own account 'A Complete History of the Great Flood at Sheffield'. I dedicate my short story to Samuel Harrison (b.1827, d.1871), without whom, much of the detail (some of which I have utilsed herein) would never have been uncovered.


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News reached the village on Sunday, 13th March 1864.

It was Joseph Cartwright, who journeyed from his home in Clowne to Sheffield by horse and cart, every alternate Saturday, to purchase crockery and sundry items from the market, who brought the news.

Cartwright had remained overnight at his sister's house in the southern most fringes of Sheffield, before embarking upon the second-leg of his journey home, Sunday morning.

He arrived back in Clowne soon after midday.

Shortly thereafter began telling his story in The Anchor Inn.

‘The Great Inundation was…’ he pronounced, ‘…an unthinkable calamity of epic proportions’.

The dreadful details Cartwright imparted to his shocked audience, spread from public house to church to shop, and back again to public house, faster, it could be said, than wildfire traversing tinder dry August moor land.

Mary Rankin heard of the catastrophe late that afternoon from a dim-witted but rather excitable farmhand named John Goodall.

She packed at once; John was a fool, she thought to herself, but not a…

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Ahmed-hamid Woody Bagala-alina said "This is my longest piece and i will say precisely very little: this piece was written as if by an on-the-scene observer. Its a great read, sad but at times taking us beyond the role of readers/observers into that of participators! Its always sad to base a story on a tragedy but you pulled it off cleanly. All the characters had `breath`! Bless!"
1 year ago
Ahmed-hamid Woody Bagala-alina replied saying "Thanks, i will stick to fiction fiction and leave the historical fiction to the big boys and girls! I can barely manage to upload stories regularly and there is no way I would tackle anything that requires more shekels! Bless!"
1 year ago
Adam West Guest Editor replied saying "Many thanks for tackling this long short, AW - and glad you thought it a great read - if you ever stray in historical fiction be prepared to spend about times ten the amount of time writing doing research! All the facts and streets and places in the story were/are real and some of the incidents too - cheers, AW!"
1 year ago
Terry Collett said "You have a clear and well documented story here, Adam, and you have delivered it very well."
2 years ago
Adam West Guest Editor replied saying "Many thanks Terry - there was an element of 'Who do you think your are' in writing this - I found it fascinating imagining some of my ancestors and their part or connection to the tragedy that cost so many lives."
2 years ago
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Adam West Guest Editor replied saying "Emmy has witnessed the blood, sweat and tears (get the cliche-ometer out folks) first-hand. Well, at least i brought her up right to be polite (and know who's boss!). I guess I ought to give her first dibs at running my fan club when I am a famous author, on the other hand the day I write something my wife actually enjoys (she hasn't read Mary and... yet) I know I will have made it."
2 years ago
John Slater said "Enjoying, Adam. If history were taught in stories like this I would've maybe learned more. Half way through and have to go out. Will finish remainder on return."
2 years ago
Adam West Guest Editor replied saying "Thanks for reading and commenting John. I think I missed your comment. I get confused sometimes following the comment threads and don't know if I have replied! Hope you finished the story and enjoyed it. Best wishes Adam"
2 years ago
Emmy West said "Really well written! Due to my often short concentration, Ive read the story in several ‘chapters’, about 15/20 minutes a time. I liked the way you were able to weave in a 'fictional' story along side the historical events of the flood (illustrating the counts untold 'human' stories which will have occurred, but not been reordered during this event). must have took a long time to write this, as you have clearly done extensive research into this event and the time period. Good use of description used to help us imagine the scenes. I didn’t see the 'twist' coming at the end and I was egger to read on and very pleased that the villain got his comeuppance!! (some what of a moral- that fraudsters will eventually get their comeuppance? )I also liked how you were able to place in your family history into this story. I also liked how you used the ‘real’ people such as the newspaper editor Samuel Harrison- again an indication that you have not ‘cut corners’ and have researched the events accurately. Enjoyable story to read :)"
2 years ago
Adam West Guest Editor replied saying "Thanks for reading and commenting at length Emmy. The research was fascinating. I was struck by how little we have changed in 150 years. The profiteers of disaster and ill-fortune were no less shy in those days, it seems. Though it should be said, acts of charity were no less common, either."
2 years ago
Don Lister said "Very well written Adam! I myself write a lot of historical fiction and have had a book of short stories on the subject published, so I know all about the hours of research one has to put in. The mixing of fiction and fact is also crucial, but you have combined the two expertly. I thought at first that the story would be overly long, but it turned out not so. I particularly liked the characters you used, and found them very believable. Well done and kind regards, Don."
2 years ago
Adam West Guest Editor replied saying "Thanks Don, for reading and your encouraging comments, in particular, about the characters. I will look up some of your historical fiction on here. I tend to flit around the genres, crime, thriller, sci-fi, horror/supernatural and the occasional historical mystery/thriller. I'm glad it wasn't overlong BTW - I am quite adept these days at employing the delete button, well, sometimes..."
2 years ago
Jay Leffew said "Congratulations on keeping the writing in the 'Period' vein, I was so afraid I was going to come across modern references like 'Rubber-necking', but you stayed with the decorum of the times beautifully, which brought the whole thing chillingly to life."
2 years ago
Adam West Guest Editor replied saying "Thanks Jay. I'm glad you were not disappointed. I had to do my share of 'rubber necking' to research the flood and the times and tried very hard to present the writing as if it had been composed at that time. Thanks again for commenting and taking the time to read it."
2 years ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor said "How very well you wove this factual and dreadful tale with the fictional angle which was both heart rending and enthralling. A really impressive piece of writing. If only the press were as kind today and thank goodness we seem to have moved on somewhat from the days when working men and their families were treated worse than cattle (at least in this country). Thanks for this thought provoking piece"
2 years ago
Adam West Guest Editor replied saying "Thanks Diane also for your reading and your encouraging remarks. I have read a few of Robert Goddard's period set mysteries and thought I'd give it a go. I'm not particularly drawn to historical fiction but there have been a couple of notable exceptions including Joseph O'Connor's Star of the Sea. Read that again not so long ago just to remind myself what an amazing story/cast of characters/brilliant piece of writing it was. O'Connor's Pius Mulvey makes my Bradley Trickett look like an angel!"
2 years ago
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Adam West Guest Editor replied saying "Thanks for reading and your kind comments Jon. I did a lot of reseacrh for this a few years back and became so enthralled with the period that I lost interest in the writing. I'm glad I spent the time reviving this story because for some strange reason, what is one of the worst disasters in modern times in the UK seems to have been forgotten."
2 years ago

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