Short Story: Marketing The Cult.

ShortbreadDavid ArmstrongShort Stories › Marketing The Cult.

Please log in or join for free to download, rate and comment on this story. You can read online without being a member!

About this Short Story

Written by
David Armstrong


Join up and feel better.


  • 936 Words
  • 12 Comments
  • 95% Community Rating
  • 283 Views

Add to Bookshelf

Competitions & Prizes

This story has not yet been entered into any short story writing competitions.

Skerla was please.

The store had been opened for a few years now and business was booming.

Actually, I think you will find I am quite capable of speaking for myself, thank you.

The authorities had already informally questioned Skerla on her business model, though not on her beliefs which were protected from scrutiny by law. Nevertheless, financial gain went hand in hand with the scale of her operation and the exceptional claims she made.

£9.99 for an honest-to-god aura cleansing. You can't see it, but I can, and it's filthy. No wonder you feel blue. Come in, come in. Best ten pounds you'll ever spend. I'll make you feel great. You'll be back again and again.

It was a simple operation and Skerla felt it was an honest one. When she was young, her friend's mother read her tarot and told her to work hard and she could have a happy life. Then the internet came along with its bag of wonders. Messageboards, blogs…

  Read Short Story     Download Short Story


Please login or join for free to rate this story.


This story has yet to be reviewed!


Andy Bottomley Guest Editor said "Mmmm....I think I'm with Adam on this one in that I would need to read this one again to fully understand the impact. Without doubt it is a complex story and were I to delve beneath the surface new lines of understanding would no doubt emerge. On first reading however I'd place this particular piece as being one of the most thought provoking pieces of late even if at this juncture I am not absolutely sure exactly what the thoughts are which is in no way a bad thing. Thanks - Andy"
8 months ago
David Armstrong replied saying "Firstly, thanks for reading and commenting, and I'm glad it was a good read. I have just bashed out an answer to Richard's question (below) which I hope explains things in their fuller context. Cheers! David."
8 months ago
Richard Ardus said "Is this a comment on the gullibility of women, as you see it, David?"
8 months ago
Richard Ardus replied saying "Thanks David - a very in depth reply, in the light of which I'll have another read soon!"
8 months ago
David Armstrong replied saying "This was certainly written from a cynical point of view however personally I wouldn't describe the target as being the gullibility of women. This general idea for his type of story actually came from a conversation I had with someone who was a keen follower of an eclectic mixture of paganism, eastern religions, native american religions. The general gist of the conversation was that the person felt that beliefs drew their authenticity through their age. When I asked how such geographically and culturally diverse belief sets came together in her mind to form a coherent and spiritually comforting whole, she again referred to how old the beliefs were; how the common denominator was that they all had roots in past ages which were less consumer driven and much more in tune with the spiritual world. I think this is a peculiar argument, as I will explain below. Meanwhile, it had already occurred to me that the recent and very significant growth in popularity of both 'ancient religions' and 'new age' healing have gone hand in hand with the rise of the internet. On one hand it could be argued that this was a democratic act; the internet allowing people to research and discover their spiritual self in the privacy of their own homes, then reach out to like minded people. That the lack of any truly dictatorial religious institution in modern Britain had freed people to explore for themselves, and Paganism and similar religions had been one of the main beneficiaries. For me, the answer to all of the above is simple: a very cynical "No, but nice try". These re-emerging religions have succeeded because they have finally found a solid brand identity. The primary consumer is women, the primary goal is growth. They are marketed and quite literally packaged and sold as a product to believers for financial profit. Some would say it was a form of manipulation - others would say it is not. I have tried to leave it to the reader to decide whilst obviously leaning towards a particular point of view myself. This made me feel a little uncomfortable; not so much at those who believe in such spiritual pursuits - what business of mine would it be to comment - but I do think it is fair to comment on the level of financial gain made by those who might see an opportunity within the vulnerability and 'willingness to believe anything' of others. Moreover, some - like Skerla, possibly - might not even realise they are taking advantage`. In 'Marketing The Cult', that willingness to believe comes from a wish to understand why the world hasn't turned out the way the women had planned. They feel cut off and emotionally trampled; the classroom represents sense and order to them, even if it represents the birth of a new form of an emotional dictatorship to outsiders. The rest is story, nothing more. Maybe."
8 months ago
Lisa Deick said "Wow I'm fascinated to know where you got your inspiration from... ;) I loved this story, for personal reasons. Ahem."
9 months ago
David Armstrong replied saying ":)"
9 months ago
Adam West said "I enjoyed this more on a second read. The idea was quite novel - several distinct voices - never easy to pull off - and the writing itself was sparse, but garnished here and there with some lovely phrases. An odd story that could have been predictable, but wasn't. Well done for thinking (and writing) in an unconventional manner - this one will certainly stick in the memory, many thanks, Adam"
9 months ago
Jay Leffew said "I actually found this amusing for some reason, and had a real chuckle at the end, well done."
9 months ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor said "This was disquieting and although I rather think that we were supposed to be very cynical you cleverly left in the possibility that at least in Skerla's mind there were some good intentions. Very well crafted I thought - Diane"
9 months ago
Adam West said "I'm putting this in my 'will read again tomorrow before I comment' folder - sometimes (for reasons I am not always sure of) I need to read something a second time to gather my thoughts - for now - many thanks, Adam"
9 months ago
David Armstrong replied saying "All good. Thanks for your comments so far! David."
9 months ago

Read and Download Adult Short Stories

Read Marketing The Cult. by David Armstrong and other Adult short stories at Shortbread!
Also, write short stories, enter short story competitions and listen to audio short stories online for free!