Short Story: Mandy's World

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This story is about us and the effect we have on our environment.


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The land remained beautiful. The green of the grassy fields, with sheep dotted like popcorn on a jade carpet, still retained its emerald lushness. The blue skies still remained breathtakingly sapphire. Here and there cotton wool clouds dared show their happy selves, asking her to forget the rains that might come down to spoil the summer’s day. And a breeze had flown over the Tay River that always captivated her mind and was now gently pulling at her hair and scarf. “Forget it,” everything seemed to say. “Forget the violence and come play with us. Come stay with us and you can still make it better. You can still keep us. There is time yet.”

The ambulances had gone from the scene of the massacre and the bodies that had spewed the streets with their blood had been taken away. There were no policemen or reporters insight. People were trying to clean the streets of the blood now, working people, paid…

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James O'kane said "Sharp and insightful, a real treat to read."
2 years ago
Sobani Devika Priyadarshinie Iddamalgoda replied saying "Hey, glad you like it!!!"
1 year ago
James O'kane replied saying "My pleasure, I look forward to reading more of your material soon."
2 years ago
Sobani Devika Priyadarshinie Iddamalgoda replied saying "Thank you for reading it. Thank you again for liking it."
2 years ago
Sobani Devika Priyadarshinie Iddamalgoda replied saying "Thank you for reading it. Thank you again for liking it."
2 years ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor said "this story carries an important message which is presented in a beautiful manner. I think you have a lovely turn of phrase."
2 years ago
Kate Smart said "What a fascinating story! wish I'd read it sooner. Really enjoyed it, thank you."
2 years ago
Sobani Devika Priyadarshinie Iddamalgoda replied saying "Thank you for enjoying it."
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