Short Story: Love Story In Three Acts

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Anja Mugerli


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Her bed, full of teddy bears. He leans down to her, breaths in her smell and kisses her. She smells like candies, those hard outside but soft inside. He puts his hand under her shirt and his heart trembles, when he finds out she is not wearing her bra. He caresses her breasts and more he caresses them softer they are. He is enjoying the feeling of her warm tongue in his mouth and arouses together with her nipples. The pain between his legs is almost unbearable. Softly he pushes her on the bed and presses himself against her. She is soft, almost too soft. Wait. Something is not right. He moves away a little. They both look down. That is not her, it is just a teddy bear. They both start laughing. In that moment they see each other in a different way.

Their bed. She is in it. She covers her legs with a blanket, but despite this her…

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Christine Human said "A clever way to move the story along splitting into three chapters which moved seamlessly along. It touched me."
3 months ago
Bill Haddow-allen said "Liked this a lot. Good idea, well handled. Like your use of smell. If your prose were music, then '...like petrified...' made a nasty distracting noise. Very modernslangy. There may be a place for it, but not here. I loved this."
3 months ago
Anja Mugerli replied saying "Thank you for you comment. Glad you liked it."
3 months ago
Jay Leffew said "Very well done. This held pathos as you sort of repeated the last line of each 'chapter'. Summing up a lifetime of forgiveness and understanding. Thank you and good luck."
3 months ago
Anja Mugerli replied saying "Thank you for your words. I'm glad you liked it."
3 months ago
Adam West said "Three 'acts' juxtaposed cleverly, bravely. I fell in love with this sentence : She places the book on her knees, something about pursuit of happiness, but all she sees is a chaos of letters. I somehow knew what the second act was as soon as it began - the last act, oddly, took me by surprise - I have a dilemma now which story to vote for - many thanks and good luck, Adam. BTW if it is not obvious, I loved it!"
3 months ago
Anja Mugerli replied saying "Thank you for your beautiful words. I translated my story in english and I was I little worried how it would come out, since english isn't my first language. I'm happy you liked it!"
3 months ago

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