Short Story: Love Song

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Almir Meljovikj


A simple random song during a simple random karaoke night prove to be a much more deeper, moving and life-changing experience for both the performer and the audience...


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‘En naw hoo’d lik’ to goo ne’xt?” uttered mechanically with an eerie smile a tall, slim, Cher-like Asian woman, hitting with her nose the side of the microphone.

Everyone sat quiet, as the lyrics started going on the huge screen in front of the audience tables. I didn’t bother thinking twice – for long enough had I thought twice – and raised my hand. The woman nodded, and I took my place under the spotlight. I’d never done karaoke before.

The beat began from somewhere afar, somewhere deep low behind me, as if within me; the lyrics snapped and rushed back from the beginning on what seemed to be a wide giant purple screen. Everyone sat staring, dumbstruck, numb. I opened my mouth to sing.

To my own half-conscious surprise, out came such fierce feelings and remembrances of a past love, of a love throbbing in the very present, like red tears on a disco-green pillow following a cruel break-up. I sang of…

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Diane Dickson Guest Editor said "Oh yes indeed the power of music and the power of poetry which is what good song lyrics must be of course, and there you have it. Over and over we are transported are we not by a song from the past. - Well done - Diane"
4 months ago
Almir Meljovikj replied saying "That is exactly how I feel about music as well. Literature, music, painting - isn't it all art? But with music particularly (though in this case karaoke...), it's a whole different field in fact - it's a sentiment that cannot be expressed in words or in colours. I suppose we'll just always keep trying to imitate and at the most mirror that feeling as closely as possible, be it in writing or otherwise. After all, isn't karaoke a kind of a mirroring imitation too? Thank you for your kind words, Diane. Best of luck with everything and cheers."
4 months ago
Adam West said "I often think (particularly with pop music) that the lyrics are less important than the delivery by the performer - the emotion felt and conveyed, which seems to be the idea here - many thanks, Adam"
4 months ago
Almir Meljovikj replied saying "I absolutely agree Adam - it's all about the emotion. Thank you for reading and commenting, much appreciated. Good luck and cheers."
4 months ago
Jay Leffew said "Yet then, no doubt, there would have been thunderous applause. It is rare for someone to so forget themselves in that situation, and the genuine emotion must have been awesome. I felt great understanding as I read this. You seem to be into psychology in all your latest stories, Almir, is something going on?"
4 months ago
Almir Meljovikj replied saying "Thanks Jay for taking the time to read and share your opinion, I'm glad you enjoyed it. The emotion, I may say, is beyond amazing, as I've experienced it first-hand (something that would later prompt me to write this piece). Nevertheless, what I wanted to say with this story, is to remind others (and myself) that music can still have a profound effect on us, that music is powerful, and that music, among other things, is art as well. Indeed jay, some of my latest stories are all about psychology - perception and emotion in particular. I've actually written these few quite a long while ago, while I was doing a bit of research on the psychological novel and observational narrative, and wanted to experiment a bit, I suppose. So there you have it, really. Many thanks again, and best of luck with everything."
4 months ago

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