Short Story: Like The Sunset

ShortbreadAlmir MeljovikjShort Stories › Like The Sunset

Please log in or join for free to download, rate and comment on this story. You can read online without being a member!

About this Short Story

Written by
Almir Meljovikj


Sasha's mundane life takes an unexpected turn, as questions about love, life and art arise during a sudden trip to a faraway destination...


  • 493 Words
  • 9 Comments
  • 75% Community Rating
  • 134 Views

Add to Bookshelf

Competitions & Prizes

Shortbread Formula 500: Travel

Competition Entry (Closed)

That she had to wait at the airport in Cabo for hours was not as painstaking to Sasha as was standing there, alone, in the midst of a crowd that was moving past her with mountains of luggage, people wearing fashionable sunglasses – men with unbuttoned shirts, beautiful women in floweresque dresses, pearls clinking with every movement and breath inhaled. She could recall each night she had spent in front of her computer, Googling, searching, hunting, for every little piece of information that would bring him closer to her – for a moment, at least. She felt him near, always.

He was a celebrity, without doubt. At times it seemed impossible that a day would come when she would actually get to meet an A-list star like himself, that he would be impressed by her ordinariness. That he was, eventually, to fall in love with her. And then she remembered the many nights she spent shedding tears on her pillow, zooming…

  Read Short Story     Download Short Story


Please login or join for free to rate this story.


This story has yet to be reviewed!


Diane Dickson Guest Editor said "This felt like heat and dust and heartbreak to me. Overwhelming feelings leading an impressionable girl down a path that she shouldn't tread, but then the ending - hmmmm perhaps - well done - Diane"
4 months ago
Almir Meljovikj replied saying "Thank you Diane for the lovely comment, I very much appreciate it. Kind regards and best of luck with everything."
4 months ago
Helen Somers said "It'll all end in tears you know!! Your parents are always right. Very good story, I did wonder if it was all a dream really, but that is because it has a hazy quality of non-realism (if there is such a sentiment). Good luck with it. Helen."
4 months ago
Almir Meljovikj replied saying "Hahah! *smile* It's actually quite possible that it might end so, Helen... But that is exactly one of the reasons I decided to end the story thus abruptly - to avoid reality kicking in... And yes, parents are of course always right. Many thanks for taking the time to read and comment and best of luck as well."
4 months ago
Adam West said "Despite the seemingly upbeat ending I retain a sense that all was not well here, regardless of the affinity. Evocative phrasing leant this a poetic quality, as I presume the author looked for - nice writing Almir, many thanks and good luck, Adam"
4 months ago
Adam West replied saying "Interesting reflection on your own writing, Almir. In the context of a 500 word competition I think you got the balance right. The poem was key here. I held certain presumptions about the A-lister and naturally felt concerned for Sasha - as a parent would, when in fact their union was meaningful and underpinned by a shared love of poetry - best wishes, Adam"
4 months ago
Almir Meljovikj replied saying "Thank you Adam for taking the time to read and comment. I do admit, the lead-in and background may have turned out a bit too detailed and therefore unnecessary; but then again, isn't everything else so in life? Too much info dimming what's truly of importance, and along with it, what's beautiful and real. As for the poetry - it sort of came to life on its own really... Many thanks and kind regards."
4 months ago
Jay Leffew said "Pensive, dream-like quality; - enjoy it while you may, but is it real? Again I think there's a lot more to this, and it isn't done justice by the 500 restriction."
4 months ago
Almir Meljovikj replied saying "Thank you Jay for the kind words, and for taking the time to read and comment. I absolutely agree with you; there just might in fact have been a lot more to it, but then there's a slight chance it would've been a bit too perfect... As Nelly Furtado would say, 'All Good Things Come To An End'. Only with this particular story, I suppose it's a kind of an uncalled-for ending. Many thanks and kind regards."
4 months ago

Read and Download Adult Short Stories

Read Like The Sunset by Almir Meljovikj and other Adult short stories at Shortbread!
Also, write short stories, enter short story competitions and listen to audio short stories online for free!