Short Story: Lightning On The Prairies

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Bobby Stevenson


Jesse is little boy with enemies in his life and in his dreams until his hero arrives.


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By the time Jesse spotted Geronimo it was way too late to outrun him. The big Chief was almost on top of the boy. It’s not as if Jesse didn’t try, he ran as fast anyone could in a ‘drip dry only, one size fits all, do not iron’ cowboy outfit, but his enemy was catching up with him, and fast.

Jesse slid in behind a large rock, the space being just enough to allow the boy to squeeze through with little chance of Geronimo following. He squatted down for what seemed an eternity and tried to avoid breathing too heavily.

Suddenly Jesse felt the air move above his head and looking up he saw the massive fingers of his enemy feeling around for the his head. There wasn’t much room to move in the cavity and this allowed Geronimo to grab Jesse’s hair with ease.

“Ow, that hurts, stoppit.”

“Then come out little warrior and I will save you more pain.”

Jesse had no…

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Fran Strahan said "Lovely story. The ending sent real live tingles down my spine!"
1 month ago
Bobby Stevenson replied saying "Thank you for the feedback Fran. Loved it."
1 month ago
Julian Fields said "Nice tale, cheering ending. Might have benefited from more atmospheric descriptions. Good joke about Jesse thinking "cardiac arrest" must involve the police. Slightly unfortunate slip into the first person part way through. I'm not sure it's correct to call this a fantasy story, though, as dreams -however vivid- are part of everyday life."
6 months ago
Jay Leffew said "This really carries you along through a child's perceptions, with understanding, depth and imagination. I can even accept that the other word used in the reference to 'rose-pergola' would be just the way a child might've heard it mentioned. The merging of reality and dreams was very cleverly done, and produced a really lovely sense of rightness at the end. Thank you very much for this uplifting tale."
8 months ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor said "Aw that's lovely, well not all of it of course, the clowns and scalping and so on wasn't but it just left me feeling happy - thanks - Diane"
8 months ago

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