Short Story: Kit

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Georgia Gill


A troubled young boy on a Glasgow estate becomes fascinated by a family of foxes living nearby in this supernatural story.


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Kit knew it wasn’t a dream because the fox standing at the foot of his bed was behaving completely normally. It didn’t start talking to him or tap dancing or anything weird. It just cocked its ears into sharp points as if to say, well, are you coming, then? Kit sat up in bed. It must be really late because the house was completely silent. His mum, dad, Billy and Shane must all be asleep in their rooms. It was dark too, really dark. Just a sliver of moonlight shone through the gap in the curtains and fell like a spotlight on the fox. It gave an expectant flick of its brush.

Kit had had a bad day. Again. He had been teased by a gang of Primary Six boys all through lunchtime. “Here he comes - the ginger whinger!” And one Primary Seven boy had shouted across the playground, “Did your mum dip your head in Irn-Bru when you were…

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Jay Leffew said "Smashing story, I wonder if they'll miss him? I always said there was more to foxes than just wiliness; they are such wonderful survivors, the way they adapt to everything. Good stuff. More please!"
9 months ago
Georgia Gill replied saying "Hi Jay, Thanks for your comments. Will they miss him? I'm not sure - I'll leave it up to the reader! I hope to put more stuff up in the future although the stories I am currently working on are chapter books and, I think, too long to post on here... Georgia"
9 months ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor said "Well, first of all this was so very well written, the pace was excellent I thought and the style was "grown up" enough for adult reading but I can see my eight year old grandson liking it as well . I loved Kit from the very start and sympathised with him and his problems. Now then foxes, love em to bits. At the end this sort of put me in mind of that famous story about yellow wallpaper, oops can't remember who wrote it - sorry. But is was a good ending I thought it was satisfying. Looking forward to more of your work - Cheers - Diane"
9 months ago
Georgia Gill replied saying "Hi Diane, Thank you very much for your comments. I've gone from feeling nervous to most encouraged. Thanks also for reminding me of The Yellow Wallpaper - Charlotte Perkins Gilman(?) I haven't read this story since I was a literature student fifteen years ago. I loved it at the time as I was studying the Victorian presentation of female mental health. Maybe aspects of it are still floating around my subconscious! Cheers - Georgia"
9 months ago

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