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Diane Dickson


There are many places that have a special magic all of their own. For us Jordan was just such a place.


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Jordan was wonderful. It may still be but when we were there in the time of the Old King it had a very special feel. It was financially poor. There are refugee camps, displaced Palestinians existing in appalling poverty. There are problems of course there are. To Quote King Hussein “they live in a difficult neighbourhood.” There’s much that is wrong but for all that it was a super place to live.

There are places where we stood on the mountains, spinning in a circle. Behind us was Amman, away to the left Jericho and the Moses Memorial. To the right the Golan Heights and below us near but yet unreachable for most of the people Lake Tiberius, or if you will The Sea of Galilee. The Jordan River is no longer deep and wide but it is The Jordan River nonetheless and the border between Jordan and The West Bank and Israel.

We travelled the length and breadth of the country…

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Patsy R Liles said "Diane, what an amazing life you have lived, to be envied. I have always been interested in Jordan. King Hussein was a commendable leader, always trying to do for his people and the world. Queen Noor wrote A Leap of Faith which I read with great enlighenment about their country and efforts to bring the Arab world together peacefully. To learn of my country's part in that failure appalled me. I do admire her so much. It is my understanding that she lives in the US part time since the King's son is now ruler, and she is happy with that. My thanks for painting this picture of a great land. Patsy"
4 months ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor replied saying "Hi Patsy, yes I do know that we have been very lucky. It was all down to my hubby having the sort of talents that were needed and then the right place at the right time and then us just taking the jump. The first trip I had never been to Heathrow Airport before and myself and the children became hopelessly lost (didn't realise there was more than one building) we nearly missed the plane to jeddah :-) but we learnt very quickly and although there were scary bits, and sad bits and boring bits now and again and really quite difficult bits (gulf war etc.) we wouldn't have missed it for the world. Thanks so much for your interest in my work and your kind comments."
4 months ago
Desmond Kelly said "Lovely piece Diane. I envy anyone who has spent time like this and is able to see the country from the inside. I wish more people would try harder to see the reality of life behind the curtain that modern tourism hides behind. Great stuff and immensely enjoyable read. Des"
4 months ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor replied saying "Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to comment. I could go on ad nauseum about Jordan it was such a super place. It is quite a while since we lived there and I expect it has changed but isn't that the real treasure of memories? nobody can take them away. Thanks again - Cheers - Diane"
4 months ago
Suzanne Mays said "I enjoy going with you on your travel stories and feel part of it. Did you ever meet Queen Noor? Good luck and thank you, Suzanne"
4 months ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor replied saying "Hi Suzanne, thanks for commenting. No we didn't meet the Queen but we did very briefly meet King Hussein. He used to go out and about in town to mix with his people fairly regularly. He was very well loved and a great force for good in the area I think and it was very sad when he died."
4 months ago
Adam West said "The breadth of your life experience, and in particular, your knowledge of diverse cultures and landscapes impacts very positively on your writing, Diane. Whenever foreign climes are the subject I know I will be in for a treat - as with this evocative piece - many thanks and good luck, Adam"
4 months ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor replied saying "Thank you so much for reading and for taking the time to comment it is very much appreciated as always - Diane"
4 months ago
Jay Leffew said "Diane! Were you in a hurry? You go to Aqaba to swim in the 'Red' sea, then in the next para you're whisked back to the slimy feel of the 'Dead' sea, and what was that 'snaking rode' earlier? - Then you had 'Limpits'?! . . . . . Mind, I wish my visit to Israel had been half as good as this; - we youth-hostelled, (my mum's latest fad at the time), and there were armed soldiers everywhere, really uncomfortable! . . . . . This was a lovely evocation, with the '...neon of the Glow-worms...'; - we saw none of that, - I'm jealous!"
4 months ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor replied saying "Ah sorry jay - I see limpits - limpets okay - thanks"
4 months ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor replied saying "Hi Jay. The trip to Aqaba and down to the Red Sea was one expedition and so we did indeed go directly from one to the other. I did mention I think that "many weekends" we went to the Dead Sea, it was a usual sort of Friday jaunt. The road does snake up the mountain, a bit like the one in the film "The Italian Job". This wasn't a visit of course it was a relocation for a good number of years. The Arab houses in Jerash are built literally onto the ancient walls of the Roman City and do truly cling on but they are small and rough compared to the original construction and do indeed look like a little undignified appendage. I think that maybe trying to fit this into the word count could have made it seem a little rushed but there we are. As for armed soldiers, the whole of the Middle East is full of armed police and soldiers and one occasion our son who was about fourteen at the time was handed a kalashnikov (s) and told to point it towards Israel and fire. That however is another story completely. Maybe for when I am not in such a rush :-). Thank you as ever for your thoughtful comments - cheers - Diane"
4 months ago
Meg Malpass said "Again I say more please. To see these places through the eyes of someone who has experienced and appreciated them is miles better than my trips on Google Earth. My only experience of the Middle East. Thank you Diane."
4 months ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor replied saying "Thank you so much Meg I really do love to have your feedback. The trouble is that there is so much and I kind of don't know where to start and how to handle it. This competition has helped a bit by making me focus on little nibbles. - Thanks again it means so much that you enjoy my bits and pieces. - Diane"
4 months ago

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