Short Story: Jenny

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A short sory recalling my childhood and the long summers down at the river in my home town of Chester.


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Jenny was made from smooth, hard wood, but for that long hot summer, she was our best friend. Jenny was our very own, semi-private, if a little tatty, river jetty.

The long walk down to the river provided its own entertainment. The journey over the suspension bridge was filled with the nervous laughter from the multi-coloured tourists. The drunken swagger of the bridge dizzied the older travellers, while the younger and more daring explorers endeavoured to rock the huge, steel mass further. This was a futile exercise, as no amount of wild jumping on the heavy wooden boards would add to the natural movement of the sturdy construction.

Then there were the real daredevils, standing on the nauseatingly high balustrade, psyching each other and themselves up to take the dangerous plunge into the black icy water below. Screaming and shouting could be heard as far away as the meadows, as these audacious adrenalin junkies leaped into the air like…

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Rachel O'brien said "Hi Marilyn, I really enjoyed your story, I could really relate to the Suspension Bridge and the Groves - I too spent my childhood in Chester and spent many summer days at Sandy Lane pool and jetty with friends. Chester is such a wonderful place."
1 year ago
Marilyn Ainsworth replied saying "Hi Rachel, it means a lot to me that you enjoyed 'Jenny' purely because you know Chester so well. I must have done it some justice. Thank you."
1 year ago
Mark Patrick said "Hi Marilyn, I hope Jenny is still there. I like the soft tone of the story, taking the reader through your vivid memories. I could feel the summer passing by on the water. Only minor suggestion I have is to maybe take out the last sentence. The story would end more powerfully with your description of the swans paddling by, like the long summer on the jetty. Thanks for sharing this delightful story. Perfect for the last days of summer."
1 year ago
Martin Thaggis said "A wistful and idyllic memory told with a gentle charm – Can I visit?"
1 year ago
Marilyn Ainsworth replied saying "Thank you Martin, it is worth a visit!"
1 year ago

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