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David Appleby


An Irish girl, an American boy, the melding power of love.


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“Where are we going?”

“I’m taking you to the country.”

“The country! Why?”

“I want to give you something.”

“Oh no. No, that’s not necessary. I want for nothing, you should know.”

An Irish girl, congenitally cautious. An Irish girl who must say ‘no’ at least three times; an Irish girl who’s drenched in ‘I‘m not able;’ an Irish girl dwelling in the grey, seldom the black and white. But I’m American, open and honest and direct. What chance do I have with her? I’ll ask her.

“Do I have a chance with you?”

She freezes. She looks straight ahead. She says nothing when I miss the turn-on for the M6. I’m determined. It’s now or never.

She changes the subject, as I knew she must. “Remember when we spent the longest night on the telephone? What began as a chat went on and on and with all that talk I admitted that I’m better on the telephone, better there than when we’re face to face. And that’s…

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David Appleby Guest Editor said "Thanks so much for reading and commenting on my story--am happy that you enjoyed it!"
1 year ago
Melford Maderazo Guest Editor said "Thanks for the entertaining read, David!"
1 year ago
Kate Smart Guest Editor said "Lovely, delicate story David. Thank you."
1 year ago
Kate Smart Guest Editor replied saying "Yes all's well here thanks David - can't wait for Spring also -good luck with your books, you are inspiring me to get going!"
1 year ago
David Appleby Guest Editor replied saying "Hi Kate, Thanks so much! Hope all is well with you...winter cold, etc...spring a month away....can't wait."
1 year ago
Jay Leffew said "I like that uncertainties of youth can be catching. The normally brash young American was tempered by the vulnerability of his conquest, and the result was very pure and right, thank you."
1 year ago
David Appleby Guest Editor replied saying "Hi Jay, Thanks for reading and commenting. Yes, the outcome for him, a soft-landing for a lucky guy."
1 year ago
Patsy R Liles said "Well done, David. The suffering we endure in cultural differences when we are all created with carbons and atoms that are aligned into male and female. You really caught it here, and I almost shed a tear with her....thanks for an enjoyable few moments with a very nice ending. Patsy R Liles"
1 year ago
David Appleby Guest Editor replied saying "Hi Patsy, Thanks so much for your nice comment...I'm glad 'she' spoke to you, and knowing this is important to me...this moment frozen, and cultural barriers begin to shatter. David"
1 year ago
Adam West Guest Editor said "Very skillful juxtaposition of personalities and cultural differences - great dialogue that read as great dialogue should - spontaneous, witty but not in a cute way that some screenwriters seem to think will impress us - many thanks, David, and good luck, Adam"
1 year ago
David Appleby Guest Editor replied saying "Adam--I appreciate your comment so much...I'm glad the exchanges in the story showed the bit of tension that exists in the cultural differences...Thanks for putting this up front. David"
1 year ago
Diane Dickson Guest Editor said "I thought this was absolutely beautiful. Very well written and a joy to read. Thanks - Diane"
1 year ago
David Appleby Guest Editor replied saying "Hi Diane....thanks so much for your comment! Hope all is well with you, and how 'bout this: Happy Valentine's Day, Diane. David"
1 year ago

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